W.I.Z.E Sucks....

[W.I.Z.E.]

Straight up old man why don't you hang up the mic,
Cuz you aint released an album a day in you life.
How long you been rhyming man f..ing 17 years?
Half your peers went on to having startling careers.
Yeah your 9-5 got you a six figure salary,
But other cats, your house = their gun gallery.
And honestly, your flow is cool but aint the best,
Your audio sounds azz I can attest to this.
You like Mike Jack, beating on a bunch of Kids,
They just started rapping, get a life play with your kid.
Posting in forums with your pseudo important and incoherent,
Stupid and boring, views that you're pouring, nobody's caring,
And the one's that do, feel sorry for you,
Like "He's been posting" forever let's give him his due.
Yeah you drop different topics but stop it they're myopic,
Your biopic should've ended when you left for college.
BUT NOOOOO...you had to come and post on Sohh,
like we needed your azz to spark some growth.
So what if other cats came and bit off your flow,
They had eminem and others so get over it yo.
Your lyrics are good but I'd rather see Buddah Mac,
You fake complex, made me wish Timevirus was back.
Your wordplay is cool but I'd rather see ER,
and your flow is cool but not on Gifted Lyricists Par.
Or Nox, hell I even like theMan's isht better,
Ties need to sever cuz you aint that clever.
The only credit I'll give you is diverse rhyme schemes,
But WHO CARES? In the real world people don't buy these.
They buy good artists, and on Sohh you've become retarded,
So later fossil there's a date with you, Dinosaurs and some Carbon.

[the puppetmaster]

And now that you've come to realise the truth about yourself the healing can begin.

:evil:

I am the Puppet Master, I approve and agree with the thread title. ..lol






















Nah seriously, i'm most likely gonna regret saying this if part 3 of our trilogy ever happened but you are by and large THE most underatted cat i've come across online, I'd go as far as to say the most talented pure writer. Pro'ally one of the very few guys on here I think can hit any subject and nail it both informatively and proficiently. The Slick Rick/ Busta Rhymes of H2SO. You and ER I think run neck and neck for the most emulated styles online whether cats realise that or not.

now, if only you had a GOTDAMN MIC THAT WORKS!!!



Don't get it twisted though, I could STILL put the stamp on you if I had to.

:laugh:






-P-

[Propaganda]

shiiiit...how'd you get a hold of my rhyme book?

[Cali_Bud]

shiiiit...how'd you get a hold of my rhyme book?
^^:laugh: but this was a hot drop W.I.Z.E

[W.I.Z.E.]

now, if only you had a GOTDAMN MIC THAT WORKS!!!

-P-

Thanks...and stay tuned. I got that under control now...

[Ecliptik]

i have nothin to say....:dry:

*continuously head butts wall due to the annoying consistency of WIZE*

[#1rapper]

good drop..but this is gonna be a linked thread in any next battle your in...in however many years that is

[theman080]

Yeah this was cool... I like the self critque satire type deal, was a different read, I tried to do one but when I was brainstorming ish about myself to diss I got writer's block...

Anyway, co-sign the props given and I think Puppet may have been partly right about you have the most emulated flow online, so thats obituary matieral.

Stay Up

[W.I.Z.E.]

good drop..but this is gonna be a linked thread in any next battle your in...in however many years that is

lol...I know right. But I mean you gotta look at yourself and be honest. I mean I'm good within a certain criteria. But in others...I'm trash. It's life...

and lol@ TheMan, word you just couldn't think of a way to diss yourself.