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paranormatic
09-05-07, 06:06 PM
*hit ain’t what it seems,
Mirror my dreams…wake up to wake up I wake up to nothing,
Cussing up a storm till I was caught in da eye,
It’s a all new high,
Kept fallin outda the sky,
Until I reached for my brother I sure I would die,
Immortalized lies polite n stereotypes hang over our heads orbiting da bed like satellites,
Feds become parasites wit paranormal abilities,
Only way to bounce back is wit spider like agility,
Oh Hip-Hop dey killin me,
Now watch dem revive me,
You katz ain’t thugs you just smoking shrubs of poison ivy,
so da rude attitude in da D.M.V don’t surprise me,
blood sucka emcees see’em flee…now step lively,
inquiry of beautiful mind…filla void,
on an A&R’s desk lied a demo covered wit white noise,
he became paranoid…destroyed his perception,
voices in his head appeared beneath his detection…not knowin dey was already there,
neglecting true hip-hop…suddenly things became clear,

Cali_Bud
09-09-07, 01:59 PM
I can't lie, this sh*t was hot

Ecliptik
09-09-07, 06:10 PM
this is hot....

question...when you write? do you right sh!t as rhymes first....or as poetry turned into a rhyme.....this would really help me to understand your style alot better cause sometimes the depth is alot different then other spits of yours....aswell at the formats and rhyme schemes...

paranormatic
09-10-07, 09:56 PM
It's a blend of both, on da poetic side i'm free but on the rhyme side i try to keep ah solid pattern

theman080
09-11-07, 12:37 PM
This was borderline dope, reminds me of some old school Andre 3000, but wtf were you talkin about half the time? You went from feds with paranormal abilities to people bein rude at the dmv to demo's on an A&R's desk in less then ten lines. What was the point?

there was some cool wording & imagery though.

paranormatic
09-11-07, 04:27 PM
Tha D.M.V is neo slang for the District of Columbia(Wash D.C.), Maryland and Virginia aka the greater Washington Metropolitan Area. sorry if i didn't explain.
I had to rap dat $hit up B...you know!!!!