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paranormatic
09-01-07, 09:24 PM
She a-rose among fresh meadows,
Where peddles plucked from coca-
flowers settle on da soul of the ghetto,
in da mist a stir of echoes
winos wine on metro,
bitter from crushed dream dey can’t seem let go,
gleam in eye fingers clutched to a pen… ink soakin in,
open mics in vein cut da tongues of soft spoken men,
exitin da golden age fore come da end of dayz,
eviction notice posted until da debt is paid,
micky slipped in da punch skip a sip at heavens gate,
dip n sniff my finger tips…excuse me if I hesitate,
I dedicate this to my brotha…forty to his memory,
A fist full of vengeance to eventually consume his identity,
doom is da remedy… from soon to infinity,
from da whom essentially…he inscrided a letter,
his hand print as da header…I assumed it was meant fa me,
any words 4 a bird on it’s last feather,
inkwell dry at sincerely… twinkle in my eye caused by fly calligraphy,
so see… logistically I’m out gunned,
tumble weed proceeds as I try n anticipate da outcome,

Ecliptik
09-02-07, 01:07 AM
i coulda swore i seen this from you already....(prolly was the poetry forum)

either way....this was prolly my favorite piece from you....good stuff

Cali_Bud
09-02-07, 11:11 AM
i coulda swore i seen this from you already....(prolly was the poetry forum)

either way....this was prolly my favorite piece from you....good stuff
no...this n!gga has posted the damn thing 3 or 4 times already. If it was your favorite piece why didn't you comment on it the first 3 or 4 times it was up..:dry: so your one of the 100 viewers with no damn feedback:thumbsdow

paranormatic
09-02-07, 11:58 AM
ahhhh!!! No Comment

Ecliptik
09-02-07, 02:38 PM
no...this n!gga has posted the damn thing 3 or 4 times already. If it was your favorite piece why didn't you comment on it the first 3 or 4 times it was up..:dry: so your one of the 100 viewers with no damn feedback:thumbsdow

i said i coulda swore i seen the **** before!!!!!

i didn't say i REPLIED to it before....*sandwich?*

paranormatic
09-03-07, 01:02 AM
u guys always respond to my threads, but I just wanted all to see and understand my threads.:argue: