View Full Version : TheMan080.....|VS|.....gr0ss<<<VOTES UP>>>
theman080
08-20-07, 08:48 PM
TheMan080
Claimin top devilish rap but ya only medievil (mid-evil), ya spit feeble
My heavy sword is less sloppy than what ya axe sent (accent), you lack sense
So testin me is doubly in vein, like shootin with twin needles, my spins lethal
Enough to have ya ass bent: Gross got merked, dethroned top perch
But dont relax and let ya guard down just cuz we past-tense, I've thrown shots first
In the first and than the last sets, but you no showed, so why the **** you challenge me
Set it in ya origin of Jamacia, make Welcome to Jamrock's first words a tuff reality
.....(out in the streets, they call it muuuuurdaaaaaaaaa).....
You cant touch my gallery, I've spit enuff gold bars to completely snuff ya salary
Ya whack skills not known to me, thats why you stay away, neva drop just over see (overseas)*
Its over G, maybe you'll finally drop a diss, and stop tryin to postpone defeat
You'se a fake *****, style's not finetuned, like punctual workers
You make-shift, you've proved your not ready to show like fukkin rehearsals
Its lame shyt, I'm forseein the end of you like doomsday prophecies
With duel raged attrocities, beat until gr0ss leaks like Lupe's properties
Son aint ready for live action, even props have you shook***
Yet you claim you on the verge platinum rappin, but only rattle hooks
When Jazper's raps smacked em, your whole style is butt
Euro trash with financial instabilities, used franchise as a crutch**
To boost your insubstantial abilities, and still you got fried in the clutch
Like gripping on lightning rods, its no shock to see you lose
Ya verses got no meat like Sororities, so theres no chance at passin dude
I frequently deepen authority, put an end to your rappin ruse
I'll heat this vet third degree, yes, I've beat the best certainly
Now I'ma take gr0ss off the map like East & West Germany
* gr0ss is jamaican
**franchise was his partna in the tag tourny,
*** no showed against propaganda
theman080
08-20-07, 08:50 PM
gr0ss drop
what the fukk?
get back cocksucker fore I break ya neck..
I'll hold ya wake in a bank and you still won't be paid respect..
They call me Savior, yes... they call YOU? Savior Breath..
like fukkin to go to sleep, you'll get laid to rest.. because this herb too soft..
and I hold the heat, that'll erase ya chest like a reverse boob job..
this sucka should know the beast and deploy all the strength of his calf on the brake..
yet he stepped to the plate, just to garnish my steak.. you ain't hard..
you a fake, you ***got.. and next time this, Busta Rhymes?? I'll have to make it clap..
still in the "Dungeons of Rap"..?? (his location)
where Nas "N.Y stated" that, them "fake niccas" like you never make it back..?? :lol
Fact the facts, you'll get no cigar, go get a sucka to vote..
cuz right now? all I hear is the cut of a throat. I hear you floored..
by my boot in the butt of the joke. I hear this whore, tryna shoot but he's nothin to smoke..
but.. dicks and cigarettes. I'll dismember dis member, remember dis ember fukka?
ya not a sniff of a contender like boxers in rehab. Stop tryna be bad.
Drop to ya knees ***. Beat me? Not tonight. I'll draw my sword but.. not to-knight.
Heads will roll, like phonecalls for beef. I hold hawks, release and my aim is exceptional..
gr0ss induce some gross and gruesome spectacles, holla back when ya gruesome..
-testicles.. Ya backbone proves flexible, and the ***** on the end of ya line's in no remote danger, he fine..
ya stretch-ya-bull..
Ecliptik
08-20-07, 09:51 PM
don't know how old this battle is...but bar for bar....it was pretty hot....080 had some filler here and there....but bounced back.....and gr0ss was more of a non-stop attack.....soooo.......gr0ss took this in my opinion....alot of hot punches on both parts though....
You'se a fake *****, style's not finetuned, like punctual workers
You make-shift, you've proved your not ready to show like fukkin rehearsals_theman080
"you a fake, you ***got.. and next time this, Busta Rhymes?? I'll have to make it clap..
still in the "Dungeons of Rap"..?? (his location)
where Nas "N.Y stated" that, them "fake niccas" like you never make it back..?? :lol"_gr0ss
those were highlights on both ends.... still...gr0ss took this battle...
W.I.Z.E.
08-24-07, 11:58 AM
TheMan080
Claimin top devilish rap but ya only medievil (mid-evil), ya spit feeble
My heavy sword is less sloppy than what ya axe sent (accent), you lack sense
So testin me is doubly in vein, like shootin with twin needles, my spins lethal
Enough to have ya ass bent: - this opening was decent but the flow was stretched and lines didn't really hit hard. Accent line was cool thought.
Gross got merked, dethroned top perch
But dont relax and let ya guard down just cuz we past-tense, I've thrown shots first
In the first and than the last sets, but you no showed, so why the **** you challenge me
Set it in ya origin of Jamacia, make Welcome to Jamrock's first words a tuff reality
.....(out in the streets, they call it muuuuurdaaaaaaaaa).....
this was cool but still didn't feel a hard attack.
You cant touch my gallery, I've spit enuff gold bars to completely snuff ya salary
Ya whack skills not known to me, thats why you stay away, neva drop just over see (overseas)*Wordplay here was forced...the Oversea reference just didn'[t work for me.
Its over G, maybe you'll finally drop a diss, and stop tryin to postpone defeat
You'se a fake *****, style's not finetuned, like punctual workers
You make-shift, you've proved your not ready to show like fukkin rehearsals[B] First two lines were good personals and hit. The rehearsal line couldn't been a lot better if you just changed "fukkin" to "bad" or "weak" or...well you get the point.
Its lame shyt, I'm forseein the end of you like doomsday prophecies
With duel raged attrocities, beat until gr0ss leaks like Lupe's properties
Son aint ready for live action, even props have you shook***
Yet you claim you on the verge platinum rappin, but only rattle hooks[B]Nice hit here.
When Jazper's raps smacked em, your whole style is butt
Euro trash with financial instabilities, used franchise as a crutch**
To boost your insubstantial abilities, and still you got fried in the clutch - Ding...now we talking. I liked these lines...keep it up.
Like gripping on lightning rods, its no shock to see you lose
Ya verses got no meat like Sororities, so theres no chance at passin dude
I frequently deepen authority, put an end to your rappin ruse
I'll heat this vet third degree, yes, I've beat the best certainly
Now I'ma take gr0ss off the map like East & West Germany
YES YES!!!! This is what I'm talking about.
See the beginning of this verse was slow and inconsistent as I noted. But then you really kicked it up a notch. Flow was cool, good azz personals so it's not like you was sitting on a pre-writ verse that you just added a few references in for gr0ss. Not your best battle verse but still solid.
W.I.Z.E.
08-24-07, 12:09 PM
gr0ss drop
what the fukk?
get back cocksucker fore I break ya neck..
I'll hold ya wake in a bank and you still won't be paid respect..Ouch...came right out the gate on this one.
They call me Savior, yes... they call YOU? Savior Breath..
like fukkin to go to sleep, you'll get laid to rest.. Almost corny...but these still hit.
because this herb too soft..
and I hold the heat, that'll erase ya chest like a reverse boob job..
this sucka should know the beast and deploy all the strength of his calf on the brake..
yet he stepped to the plate, just to garnish my steak..Nice word play here good lines..
you ain't hard..
you a fake, you ***got.. and next time this, Busta Rhymes?? I'll have to make it clap..
still in the "Dungeons of Rap"..?? (his location)
where Nas "N.Y stated" that, them "fake niccas" like you never make it back..?? :lol
Fact the facts, you'll get no cigar, go get a sucka to vote..
cuz right now? all I hear is the cut of a throat. again fierce attack...just laughing because you shot him...then a few lines later you're cutting his throat. Man you really want him dead.
I hear you floored..
by my boot in the butt of the joke. I hear this whore, tryna shoot but he's nothin to smoke..
but.. dicks and cigarettes. I'll dismember dis member, remember dis ember
Flow is SILLLLKKKKKKKK...cool lines and wordplay as well
fukka?
ya not a sniff of a contender like boxers in rehab. Stop tryna be bad.
Drop to ya knees ***. Beat me? Not tonight. I'll draw my sword but.. not to-knight.Ouch...nice "knight" reference. I feel like you didn't have the best build up to this last line but it was still effective.
Heads will roll, like phonecalls for beef. I hold hawks, release and my aim is exceptional..
gr0ss induce some gross and gruesome spectacles, holla back when ya gruesome..
-testicles.. Ya backbone proves flexible, and the ***** on the end of ya line's in no remote danger, he fine..
ya stretch-ya-bull..
This is a hard battle to judge. The Man came out weak but finished strong. Gr0ss was VERY consistent and had the harder hitting verse. BUT TheMan had more personals.
In the end though my vote goes to gr0ss. Honestly, this was one of the better verses I've seen from you and you were hitting hard line after line after line. It's hard to battle agains that.
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