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W.I.Z.E.
08-16-07, 09:49 PM
She was a SAG,
but not zodiac though in fact,
she’s a starrrr,
Smokin’ Ace so holdin’ that,
from a farrr
seemed exciting and understood,
she hung w/ the worse guys in the worst hoods,
and clung to the earth tight, why? cuz it’s good,
Goods seeped in, the meek and weak would,
Critique but stood still when action was needed,
Her father used to speak of life before Jesus,
And beauty of the world he nicknamed her Egypt
Mother Neferteti, and sisters name was Giza.
Grew and one day she met a man named Ceasar,
They left Africa and settled in Ibiza.
Two kids one name Peter the other named Alysa,
Lisa fled to (Palos) Spain and always was a traveler,
A boy named Chris would always want to have her,
She said earth is round he laughed and said is flatter,
than her chest, and reached out to grab her
she stood in jest said let’s see,
He said I’ve been planning this trip across seas.
To find a new way to get to the Far East,
So she let him lead the way to keep peace.

You’ve heard it all before,
her story is no different,
She wrote hieroglpyhics
and even contrived physics,
So let me just tell you story the way I know it,
Cuz if he had it his way HIStory won’t show it.


Happy she left all grief disposed, manically preached the pros,
sun bleached left moon seeped in woe
He was unique built homes w/ God touched hands,
Forgot weeks of work, finished product massive and,
beautiful, similar to wife in said stature,
she captured his mind and soul but fled after,
Mohammed was conceived despite the devils laughter,
See she was deceived perceived and fled barren,
Thought as an orphan he spoke lessons of prior,
to his adulthood but she sparked the fire,
The persecution wouldn’t let her raise her son,
see people thought her son was young, crazy and dumb,

Cali_Bud
08-16-07, 11:18 PM
Hot drop man, This was really good sh*t.

Universe
08-18-07, 11:46 AM
Poetry in motion. I loved the hook, the content, the flow... everything.

Ecliptik
08-20-07, 06:30 PM
yea....i gotta co-sign for the best flow on sohh....sonofa*****!

you need to stop bein so damn consistant so i can talk shyt about something damnit!

W.I.Z.E.
08-30-07, 03:03 PM
Thanks yall.

lisbonic
08-30-07, 09:01 PM
Ya'll apparently ain't heard his voice, all "sucking on Now & Laters and forgetting to swallow the spit" type flow.

:mad:


Nice kid. Get at me about the beats you need when your free.

W.I.Z.E.
09-04-07, 07:54 PM
Ya'll apparently ain't heard his voice, all "sucking on Now & Laters and forgetting to swallow the spit" type flow.
:mad:
Nice kid. Get at me about the beats you need when your free.


Did you get me email?

somenerve
09-04-07, 09:30 PM
Nice, def a fresh drop!

Listen
09-05-07, 01:50 PM
Did you get me email?


Yeah man, working out the kinks now. Got a different beat I made for it....chorus is scuuuury though!

W.I.Z.E.
09-05-07, 02:21 PM
Yeah man, working out the kinks now. Got a different beat I made for it....chorus is scuuuury though!

Trust me...I know the chorus is jokes and quite scurry. Working on a female vocalist for it. If that works then it can be that isht.

Listen
09-06-07, 12:06 PM
Trust me...I know the chorus is jokes and quite scurry. Working on a female vocalist for it. If that works then it can be that isht.



Check your e-mail punk.

W.I.Z.E.
09-06-07, 03:54 PM
Check your e-mail punk.


Can't now but will later tonight.

I'll also delete these posts by tomorrow.