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Raw Spits
08-11-07, 11:56 PM
My flow and Words twist like Roots below the Earth's grips
Roses flourish, beliefs grow from Prose to Verses
Each is a seed for me to Probe the Dirt with
Wrote in Cursive, Penmanship close to Perfect
Approach the Surface, Great sounds Break Ground
My stem Breaks Down under the Weight Now
Thorn prick fingers, leavin Scarlet Stains
Wounds heal with time but still you find the Scar Remains
That's the hardest part of Change, it seals the deal
So an artist guards his pain with a Shield of Steel
Pain feels so real, if its a Case of Perception
Why'd it taste so Bitter-sweet when I ate up the Lessons
On a plate of Depression, on a plate of Depression
The fruit looks ripe, the Taste of Obsession
I hate indigestion, I chewed it so deeply
It was like heaven when I let the juices Flow Freely

theman080
08-12-07, 12:02 AM
This was pretty dope, good vocab and wording, flow was on point....reminds me of some other catz from another board...

Prolific_1011
08-12-07, 03:58 AM
:ohmy:

that was a beautiful piece. period.

Ecliptik
08-12-07, 03:45 PM
nice....i haven't seen you spit somethin like this in years....good ****

ILL_FAM
08-12-07, 10:01 PM
this is the first of ur **** ive seen ya know im relatively new hear yeah man thats dope right dere...

My flow and Words twist like Roots below the Earth's grips
Roses flourish, beliefs grow from Prose to Verses
Each is a seed for me to Probe the Dirt with

had me gasping already

real fire

Raw Spits
08-12-07, 10:14 PM
Thanks fam....appreciate the rates