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Bosstradamus
08-10-07, 01:28 AM
once again back its the rediculous/
i stay rippin ****/
battlin cats.. its no predicament/
im twistin ligaments/
even the cops is gettin sick of it/
im spittin rigorous/
never sell out like them mainstream sonofa*****es did/
never said i was a gangsta, i stay away from the buscuits kid/
but if you cross the line, guranteed that im gona split ya wig/
some of these rappers, well its not your time/
you might think so but your outta ya mind/
so when the title is mine/
ill put my life on the line/
you only hatin cuz u cant take the bright from the shine/
ima beast/
imagine the amount of gun powder my mouth needs/
i gota full clip, ima spit more shells than sunflower seeds/

Raw Spits
08-10-07, 08:43 AM
Not bad homie........Your structure was alittle ehh..... Made it difficult to follow, Also this seems like a keystyle cause there was no main concept but still nice flow


Flowed like milk.....Nice

Raw Spits
08-10-07, 08:53 AM
Not bad homie........Your structure was alittle ehh..... Made it difficult to follow, Also this seems like a keystyle cause there was no main concept but still nice flow


Flowed like milk.....Nice

Wordsmyth
08-10-07, 08:58 AM
Should have been a longer, by the time I got to the end it looked like you were just getting going good.

The opening lines had me thinking :thumbsdow but you picked up after that with your flow and it started going good :yes: then it was over :dry: . Overall not a bad drop... Next time put a little more too it..

holla