Freestyle 09/08/07

[Mukel]

I see the b*tch in your eyes,
a man hiding himself with lies,
searchin for the truth so we ask why?
shy away from reality, so we drift away,
search for sun sea and sand at the doc of the bay,
a little getaway, a home away from home,
but you have no friends and family, so you find yourself alone,
roaming the earth like a nomad, a hired hand,
looking for a defining moment, a last stand,
snitched like a b*tch, and you did it for a price,
but at what price, would you pay to take it all back,
can never go home, cos you'll get violated, so your now isolated,
thugs look for your self, creep in the shadows in stealth,
kill you x rated, im stating, your no one if no one wants you,
but if your wanted, best believe someone will find you,
protection can alway be bought for a price,
but best believe the exact same can go for your life!

[theman080]

This was good, but you need to sit down and actually put together a story and write it out. This randon ass shyt is gonna get skipped over, when people see freestyle [insert random date] they're probably just gonna skip over it.

this was good though for something this short, told a cool story