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theman080
08-07-07, 02:23 PM
1st Verse - 080
2nd - Bosstradamus
3rd- 080



Check the national impresario, I'm already known
Ya small time so I slaughter you, they'll martyr you tho//
I'm a marksman marvel who moves wit marvelous modes//
Marauder, my code of honor, is bombin army's of hoes
With a flawless armament tearin garments to get off in they throat//
The sergeant of tossin targets who were caught with the chrome//
Into compartments with carpets that are all on the bones//
For concealment from that sqeal shyt as I toss em & go
I'm charming wit flow, change the subject to the future and now//
The uzi's are out, so the future is manuevering pounds
The present for you is the endin, ya soon to be down

rappers are in danger when they step in the zone/
im blessin the chrome, like jesus.. i rest in the throne/
my presence alone, will slice you from ya neck to ya dome/
so i stay rippin tracks, what u expect me to do/
nowadays these rappers stink worse than pepe le pew/
nah i aint a punchline rapper, im just messin wit you/
but how u gona get love when u dont get respect from ya crew/
Xplicit, my style is wicked/
but dont hate on me homie, im just sayin what nostradamus predicted/
so you cant hate all you want, nobody heard of you/
this is my last bar, cuz my mans theman O 8 zero already murdred you/

Coffins & dirt, roll in ya grave, cartwheel first
Bury you alive, dig you up, and put my arson to work
I figure you suck, malignant figment whose been sniffin up dust
I'll vaccum ya brain, shatter your frame, sinister stuff
Beginners are fukked, aint all fair when I clap back
Sermons are legit, paulbearer to whack raps
You mirror my act black, beware of the axe slash
Got insurances ya 'duckin' me, preparin wit Afflack


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Propaganda
08-07-07, 04:27 PM
shyt's wack and gay.

Ecliptik
08-07-07, 04:35 PM
^^^ummm....wow....lol

i was gonna say the rhyme is koo...don't quite get the concept though

Mukel
08-07-07, 04:47 PM
It was ok, strictly, you've done a lot better than this mr theman080,
bosstradamus verse was good, liked it, just didnt like the concept really.

theman080
08-07-07, 08:17 PM
shyt's wack and gay.


Lmao, Props, I told you I used a condom on her, get over it. I AM NOT YOUR FATHER, just because I wont submit to do the tests doesn't make me guilty. I'm sorry, you and Courtdog are still bastards...

:smoker:

#1rapper
08-07-07, 09:13 PM
average, imo the boss came harder 080 seemed like u just hurried this 1

Prolific_1011
08-07-07, 09:23 PM
i was feeling it. not everything has to have some crazy concept. i just read the verses and the flows were smooth as hell.

"rappers are in danger when they step in the zone/
im blessin the chrome, like jesus.. i rest in the throne/
my presence alone, will slice you from ya neck to ya dome/"

^^^that was ill bosstradamus.

080's first verse was nice. his second one was aight but i liked the following line...

"I figure you suck, malignant figment whose been sniffin up dust
I'll vaccum ya brain, shatter your frame, sinister stuff."

it was a short drop but bosstradamus held his own with the illest writer on this forum.

overall 3.25/5

Bosstradamus
08-08-07, 12:44 AM
word props to the feedback...

Soul Deep
08-09-07, 02:02 AM
Yea, overall this wasnt bad, some good lines from theman, Bosstradomus came on it smooth, but should of came with some more.

ILL_FAM
08-09-07, 11:39 AM
most def the flow was tight i thought well the way i read it u know....

boss....
rappers are in danger when they step in the zone/
im blessin the chrome, like jesus.. i rest in the throne/
my presence alone, will slice you from ya neck to ya dome/

that was nice....

over all the man just kilt it as usual but really good **** yo peep my #1rappers joint when it drops hopefully today sumtime