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jrz23
08-07-07, 12:25 AM
ILL FAM
LISTEN, *****. that verse ISN'T ****. I'll CLEAN THOSE CLOCKS of EMO BROADS, and THESE CHROME DOGS with CLIPS WILL SPIT and leave homegirl with her FEET BLOWN OFF and a MISSING TIT!!!/ (hah!) I'll "Shoot the web up" on some SPIDER ****, I'll RETIRE CHICKS...but what a ****TY WAR, only time this girl could "GIVE ME BARS" is if I TRIED TO HIT!!!/(underage-ass *****) dat's why my GUN'LL BLAZE, DAT'S IT! (listen close) ya "Parts" will "rip off" when you're "Shot" ..like an UNDERPAID ACTRESS!/(wOw!)
acting manly, this BATCH SHOULD FALL BACK! I'll SLAP DIS BROAD's ASS..nah, da CHICK'S IS A "RAT" so I'll let a "CLIP HIT HER BACK" like I SNAPPED HER BRA STRAP!!!!/(dayum!) ddnt U kno?? "Haiku" done in "3 lines!" I SMASHED HER INFINITE, *****, only time you "holdin Cream?" well, AFTER I'M "FINISHED!!!"


JRZ23

yea, yea, holla at me! (What it do!!!!!)
Yup Im layin it right, ma sayin that the game is tight.... So best believe she let me loosen her up (yeah)
Now Im diggin deep in her butt, layin deep in her guts, sprayin shots on her D cups, the bed game vicisous, the Michael Phelps of back stroking the way I swim through *itches (yessir)
major swag, as the jeans sag ova the MJ’s I blow haze, and keep a fitted leaned over the fresh fade (yeah)
Neck on chill and you know the wrist stay bright, one glimpse of the whip will keep shorty open all night.
And it aint nothing new to a playa, slide shorty some kush and me, her and her girlfriend go tangle later, a couple shots of the patron now they off in a zone, im long strokin, and mami hopin that im takin her home, but that’s just something I don’t do, I just turn em out and by 3:15 I be kickin em out.

theman080
08-07-07, 12:28 AM
good **** guys, I like this better then Jrz first drop, the format could improve but the flow was better. Illfam ya **** was pretty dope, the flow and wording was on point. Wording was on point for Jrz as well...

jrz23
08-07-07, 12:30 AM
yea man we just scrapped this together, the flow will improve over time!

Hell On Earth
08-07-07, 03:14 AM
Ya *****s need better topics, get off that whole treating this ***** like hoe ****.

ILL_FAM
08-07-07, 10:37 AM
dont be mad hell on earth caus ei treat ya mammy that way

pimping :smoker:

ILL_FAM
08-07-07, 10:40 AM
good **** guys, I like this better then Jrz first drop, the format could improve but the flow was better. Illfam ya **** was pretty dope, the flow and wording was on point. Wording was on point for Jrz as well...

yeah man much appreciated

Ya *****s need better topics,

not for a freestyle collabo as u can see the thread hasn't got a title :smoker: