Freestyle

[jrz23]

Visions of dark hoodz/

lay over your head like dark hoodz/

And every night another ***** getting blazed like an old dutch/

A couple slugs will leave you crippled, and you walking with no crutch/

And such crimes happen everday but yet some just/

Because a man has to eat to keep his family alive/

so he will rob to survive/

Kill to stay afloat/

slang dope out his coat/

run up on you with the steel/

Put the gat to your side when you sittin behind the wheel/

BANG!

Another dude is lost but a family is fed/

Lord we know it's wrong but all of our alternatives are dead/

A nine to five in the hood/

wont do you any good/

so *****s will risk a three to nine/

To get a piece of the shine/

Or risk a 25 to life/

To have a taste of the finer life/

But can you really blame us for wanting to make it up/

When you aint ever had ****/

You do your best to keep it up/

So now your walkin with your gun/

And you keep it loaded up/

so the first chain you see/

your ready to lift It up/

snatch it off his of his neck/

and let the cannon hit em up/

rip apart the jewels and pawn em for a couple bucks/

get your baby boy his toy truck/

and get the bills paid up!/

BANG

It happens so fast/

But what are we supposed to do/

When the system is forever crooked/

And we never get our do!

[ILL_FAM]

i feel that u rushed this abit duke u know but it had its strong points like rhyming in some places was kool

And every night another ***** getting blazed like an old dutch/

A couple slugs will leave you crippled, and you walking with no crutch/

And such crimes happen everday but yet some just/

wat up with the spaces though

not to say anthing but the wya i rhyme is like

i spit phrases that thrill, write pages thats real
words and verbs hit like guns *pop* murder herbs
killed stages at will, build bridges and chilled (refering to beef)

u know that mine above basic but u get the structure

it like 1,2,1 if u get me LMAO

[jrz23]

i feel that u rushed this abit duke u know but it had its strong points like rhyming in some places was kool
wat up with the spaces though
not to say anthing but the wya i rhyme is like
u know that mine above basic but u get the structure
it like 1,2,1 if u get me LMAO


lol I just space my line so people can read each word and not stumble through it.

[ILL_FAM]

yo u get my messages man....i send u a little verse that u can use to collabo with me ya know