Freestyle 21/07/07

[Mukel]

Get the novacane, numb the pain,
so you dont feel it when I beat your ass with a bamboo cane,
inflamed gums bleeding due to tooth decay,
drilling down to the bone, ricter scales off the scale today,
flowing so smooth back to the groove,
mukels melt down takes down you apes now,
bow down the rules back, sick to death no longer willing to take flack,
turn your back and get stabbed, grab the blade pull it out and do it again,
im insane, chemicals bubbling, mind is crumbling,
im ali, you foreman, we rumbling, but best believe i rope a dope,
and you tumbleing, your falling into the abyss,
your driving miss daisy, but your high and you memorys hazey,
patchy to say the least, stop being stereotypical,
like, we aint all gonna grow old and have false teeth,
ma boys gots to keep the peace, increase if we,
show some love, to one another and to the next man repeat,
we can be in a safe society, no vigalante,
go on your holidays, sit on a beach in some spanish destination
like alicante, or you can stay in hickville and interbreed with your auntie!!!

[theman080]

it was an ok read, you flow is a bit choppy, try workin on keeping the syllable count in every line kinda close... like

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Get the novacane, numb the pain,
so you dont feel it when I beat your ass with a bamboo cane,

goes to

Get em the novacane, bettin he'll know the pain
When plant em in the dirt, easy expose a lame

feel me?

[Mukel]

it was an ok read, you flow is a bit choppy, try workin on keeping the syllable count in every line kinda close... like
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Get the novacane, numb the pain,
so you dont feel it when I beat your ass with a bamboo cane,
goes to
Get em the novacane, bettin he'll know the pain
When plant em in the dirt, easy expose a lame
feel me?

Yea, i like that, thanks