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somenerve
07-17-07, 10:39 PM
To present yall with properly a true genius behind some of what you’re reading
I must truly diversify and kick some rhymes that just jump from inside to land on some paper and this page for interested minds

So if I must let out just once an explanation, a bio, a resume of sorts
Let this be that moment
What inspires what I write, what you read, what could be art
Custom poetry, call it what you want, just get my point
Or could be something you can pick a apart instead I suggest
Use constructive criticism and then feel the parts that you read and relate to, situations in all our lives or just yours and mine

I can’t only spit for battle and fun it’s got to be poetic expression from my life, day to day, reality we or just you and I confront
A release some way of reaching out my own psychiatric treatment
Maybe a day it is read and is seen as a plan to save a life I never seen
Data we seek during dilemmas no matter what we will have to face
Different stories, different outcomes, yet all the same

I hope these bars, words, feelings, whatever travel beyond just lyrical criticism that some or one of them keep heads up and shoulders straight
I am only human not just me but we so there is not much difference I see
Let it go through a talent that can be expression, confession, repent, or just inspiration
It could be for anyone who hears, who reads, who needs, we all bleed

BreakCanon
07-17-07, 11:43 PM
Whereas I write with the blunt edge of a worn knife, your writing is akin to the lightness of a kite. I enjoyed this prose'y piece, somenerve.

"A release some way of reaching out my own psychiatric treatment"

Me too brother.

somenerve
07-18-07, 12:14 AM
I appreciate your honest and candidness Break
Good lookin