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Mukel
07-11-07, 09:04 PM
check the backdrop, the sun sets every day,
snow falls in winter, but whats the weather in may?
come what may, we all stay the same,
we never change our face, the same expression,
quit your moaning, dont get the wrong impression,
the flows infectious, but so is aids,
people dont understand, when it rains it rains,
we all shoot each other, then what would we have left,
a smoking barrell, some shells, and a smaller population no less,
i confess i have evil thoughts, have an evil stair an evil glare,
have some mad ideas, some bright ideas, the right ideas,
indeed, we dont know which direction to take it,
and not everyone who raps a good rap will make it,
promotion is 95% of hip hop, but you cant just fake it,
real is real, motherf*ck, just ask ol' holyfield,
a little rap, off the top, to tell you how i feel,
never rap about shooting caps and taking peels,
the type of cat, to steel a police cars wheels.

BreakCanon
07-11-07, 09:48 PM
This was good. Diverged from the deluge of crap. The flow falters in some places, but overall, it was top notch.

W.I.Z.E.
07-13-07, 12:05 PM
this was decent....not really any direction just spitting. as was said above flow was off and on. good start. would like to see a lil more complexity. or better flow if you gonna rhyme on a tangent.