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theman080
06-23-07, 03:01 PM
I'm Back

The heater levitatin opponents, phonies faces painted and swollen
I basically own it, homie hold it, the feature presentation is rollin...

The clip depicts Shakespeare drugged out while wordin soliloquies
Burn through futility, turnin murderous versions of villainy
His pen was sicker then mine, viscous lines consisting of crime
Incest and battles of intellects interject his insidious lines
An oddisey of massacres manufactured at spectacular paces
Daggers in placement, for dramatic actors for slashes in basements
Bastards get wasted, finished with vivid descriptions of death
Finishin fresh with splintered flesh, and injurin vets
He paved the way for Poe's classics, gothic horror in hell
Not my steez but I admire it, topics hard to be felt...

The flick switches to twin kittens lookin sick in they thin britches
Coversatin through the plasma screen, granted me six wishes
First is for a genocide, provided by bullets and gas chambers
To fools wit they act lamers, be buried and mad acres
Deep in the dirt, cheapened worth is easy to merk
The second wish is heavy hits, procedure repeated the first
Platinum plaques are hatched and stacked, millions come afta that
The third is extended evolution movin to mind readin exubrence
Feed on the stupid, harvest the smart, then start receivin the fusion
The forth combines wit the fifth, dine the chicks, provide em a ****
Get my eye on the sixth, a newer seed to double the original dosage

Settin Standards...by a kind reminder of others who did it and a personal example of my own... :smoker:

theman080
07-03-07, 11:42 AM
help...i need somebody...HELP

Cali_Bud
07-03-07, 04:17 PM
...never 1 to hate, this was a hot joint. This forum is dead as hell...wake up you lazy a$$ bums...:dry:

Ecliptik
07-04-07, 04:30 PM
...never 1 to hate, this was a hot joint. This forum is dead as hell...wake up you lazy a$$ bums...:dry:

*stretches from deep sleep*

i miss anything?

theman080
07-13-07, 12:06 PM
seriously???







new **** forthcoming

W.I.Z.E.
07-13-07, 12:13 PM
Nice as usual man. I see you as part of the third coming on this site.

1.) The Originators = Woo, Scrib, Medallion, Mariner, Wordswrath, Zarbon, etc.
2.) Second Sworm = PM, Cryo, Nox, Esnc
3.) Revitalize = ????????


The flow of the piece was cool as well. Content was different and on point. I felt like I would like to see you build out the six points more. You could make one verse for each joint and go real deep on imagery. Plus it would prolly be a good exercise for you in terms of creativity and stickin on point.

I say that I kinda felt like the end was rushed. Ya dig?

like I said nice piece.

tash8
07-13-07, 12:49 PM
nice vocab yet again, decent multis and your good at staying on point in this which is good... keep at it :D