styling with keys (pt. 2)

[m 0 s e s]

they let the animal out the cage raging viens in his neck
the beast feasts on death gnawing pieces of your flesh
the emcee warrior, ya'll get stretched to cure my hungar
skin a concentrated armor something your slugs cant puncture
credible lyrics incredibly spit or written professionally
i'm the executioner adorning black hoods to carry out the death penalty
on those who murdered hip hop and it's whole entity
when the best emcee's is mentioned you better mention me
i'm listening to beats, getting dome while i'm steering the drop
your lyrics written hypocritically, right here your career comes to a stop
my lyrics is written viciously, like ripleys you can believe it or not
you dudes is quite b-tch-to-me, get off my penis or c0ck
i create the illest scribes imaginable when i pushed the pen in
my mouth is a lethal weapon unload smith and wesson in each session
i got these internet nerds arguing over my bars, who the best is?
ya'll murdered hip hop they made you battle me, the death sentence

[payhomage]

My Grandmother Raps Better Than U

[W.I.Z.E.]

they let the animal out the cage raging viens in his neck
the beast feasts on death gnawing pieces of your flesh


Nice Start...


i'm the executioner adorning black hoods to carry out the death penalty
on those who murdered hip hop and it's whole entity
when the best emcee's is mentioned you better mention me
i'm listening to beats, getting dome while i'm steering the drop
your lyrics written hypocritically, right here your career comes to a stop
my lyrics is written viciously, like ripleys you can believe it or not
you dudes is quite b-tch-to-me, get off my penis or c0ck


I liked the first two lines...the nexttwo lines were straight forced to me. the last few were cool. Good effort at making all these bars rhyme...


Overall nice effort...

[Wordsmyth]

I agree with WISE this was a pretty good. Only thing I could say constructive to help would be to work on the flow, a different choice of words here or there can really make your rhyme come together and still keep the meaning you intended. But good ish overall.