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Mukel
06-18-07, 07:41 PM
Sandpaper thinning at your skin, your edging over the brim,
your on the brink, your surrounded by four brick walls,
and your eyes just blink, your sinking in to insanity,
shallow and vanity, for the love of humanity, can it be,
a vigalante masked in glory, basking in victory, policing all vacinitys,
applying for roles, filling the san andreas fault,
holt who goes there, a being that stands hair on ends,
metalic objects, with his mind he bends, mankind he defends,
you can not comprehend, concepts misread and taken out of context,
cross examing the contence, we could all sit on the fence,
but in defence, where would that leave us heevens,
masquarading in masks with meat cleavers,
but we should all give a damn like some busy bee beavers,
hence why we scrimp and save every shilling and pence,
in this dence universe, indulging the perverse,
splurging with words of curse, with wrongly raised rascals,
quick to snatch an elderly womans purse,
in reverse, should we convert and blurt,
passages and scriputres that conspire and concieve,
lies and read love god, or should we all reach sanity,
and abolish and gain clarity,by looking after ourselves,
and forget charity, civilty like silence is golden,
word is spoken, like word is bond, we all grown feelings,
and with absense the heart grows fond,
but remember bruv, life goes on!

Avalon Artorius
06-19-07, 12:54 AM
i love the face that u hvae ur own style...good job on not rapping about watever else is out there and wat interests u....as far as the post..it coulda been more polished and better..but u def have the potential to work on it and make it tighter...1