Diagnosis: I n v i n s i b l e

[m 0 s e s]

while other dudes rock the mic with that whack sh-t in masses
trying to decipher my lines causes anurisms and brain spasms
matter afact f-ck this rap sh-t i get the message
you cant even listen to my bars if you're epileptic
may cause seizures to non believers of me the new jesus
the new cesar destined to get betrayed by his people
sitting in a cathedral penning devlish lyrics that's lethal
on the floor inside a pentagram diagram, following occult proceedures
sacrifice emcee's on a podium surrounded by satanic symbols
as me and my warriors quench our thirst on blood of your kinfolk
ever since before they cut the ambilical cord moses been getting it on
one end was a microphone the other end lodged in my abdominal
nowadays rappers rap to taint the innocence of children
that's why me and my wolves lay seige to your studio buildings
so step up and before we get into the battling, -- think
i am a man who reads Wikipedia and clicks every available link
A knowledge Seeker that'll use all the wisdom conjured to pick you apart
A crazy MC who sits and reads in the dark
i'm just a white boy from the suburbs who fell in love with hip hop
they didn't care if his wrist was rocked or if it's clips he popped
they threw on any number of beats and he ripped and rocked
spit so much they put a hannibal mask over his lips to lock
they threw him in a room and studied his animalistic behavior
i made an enviroment out of that sh-t .. i call it the 86th chamber
with a few a notepads, cool edit, some headphones and a laptop
i became unamused by rappers who brag about how the gats pop
24/7 lyric conjurerer, i started to rhyme from dusk to dawn
they fed me MC's threw a slide in the door and i digested em thru a straw
because they wouldn't take my mask off i was too raw
knocks on the door take me out of the norm what you botherin me for?

*breathes*

a monsterous behemoth known to spring verbal attacks without reason
there's no emcee breathing that's on my level so forget a song feature
i'm just a tool - fed lines from the tiny gnomes and the demons
that lurk around my nebula, in my brains left hemisphere region
you can't breath the same air that i breathe so dogg just cease it
before i spit a verse so sick your brains comes out your ears thru bleeding
and f-ck if my keystyles are too long, i express myself thru these pieces
that just means that you dont have the attention span to sit down and read it
you lack intelligence, while i was locked up i shaved down my fingerprints
so when i got out i could kill you f-cks and leave no evidence
a lyrical marksmen, the beatsmith conjured up the bass chemical
added 2 mililiters of me .. chemical reaction critical i came out so lyrical
i'm hearing you .. but you sound to me like youre a little miserable
you said you were sick but now im starting to think you were speaking literal
i'll break down your very exsistence to the smallest mineral
and crush your weak lines into sand particles in between a fist or two
i'm a general ... you peons take orders from the commander in chief
the commander is me, brandish a beat ill bring it to its knees
with the illest quoteables the word has ever seen
sometimes I myself can't believe what comes out this pen when i squeeze
as i jot down lines, lyrical exercise, i work out my speech
warrior tattooed into my neckflesh i do this sh-t for prestiege
i do this sh-t for the streets of this ghetto ass neighborhood i dwell
filled with coke sales but still everyone around me is broke - oh well
go ahead with your gossip and rumors, tell 'em how i rock sh-t
obnoxious, spittin' doctrine after doctrine over beat boxes
quote my product, and be glad that i gave you that option
i'm outta' this world so let me climb back in this cockpit
so run along now and quote my lines just to pass the time
it takes me to type out part two of sh-t inside my book of rhymes..

[Cali_Bud]

good drop m0ses, I liked the style, not so much worried about rhyming but saying what you gotta say. Good stuff

[Avalon Artorius]

The lines that were sick:
"sacrifice emcee's on a podium surrounded by satanic symbols
as me and my warriors quench our thirst on blood of your kinfolk"

ever since before they cut the ambilical cord moses been getting it on
one end was a microphone the other end lodged in my abdominal

nowadays rappers rap to taint the innocence of children
that's why me and my wolves lay seige to your studio buildings

A knowledge Seeker that'll use all the wisdom conjured to pick you apart
A crazy MC who sits and reads in the dark

may cause seizures to non believers of me the new jesus
the new cesar destined to get betrayed by his people
sitting in a cathedral penning devlish lyrics that's lethal

they didn't care if his wrist was rocked or if it's clips he popped
they threw on any number of beats and he ripped and rocked

a monsterous behemoth known to spring verbal attacks without reason
there's no emcee breathing that's on my level so forget a song feature


and f-ck if my keystyles are too long, i express myself thru these pieces
that just means that you dont have the attention span to sit down and read it<--hot as **** (but seriously, this **** is too long, lmao)

you peons take orders from the commander in chief
the commander is me, brandish a beat ill bring it to its knees


Weak Lines:
matter afact f-ck this rap sh-t i get the message
you cant even listen to my bars if you're epileptic
(just wasnt feeling it...at all....too dr seus)

i made an enviroment out of that sh-t .. i call it the 86th chamber
with a few a notepads, cool edit, some headphones and a laptop
i became unamused by rappers who brag about how the gats pop
24/7 lyric conjurerer, i started to rhyme from dusk to dawn
they fed me MC's threw a slide in the door and i digested em thru a straw
because they wouldn't take my mask off i was too raw
knocks on the door take me out of the norm what you botherin me for?
- I understand how and where u wanted to go with this, which was ill, but poorly written, was written as well as ur other ideas

you can't breath the same air that i breathe so dogg just cease it
before i spit a verse so sick your brains comes out your ears thru bleeding
-makes no sense at all..how can ur brains which is a solid form, come out ur ears as blood, and has liquified?

Just my opinions above

AIM: Avalon Artorius

[Wordsmyth]

I agree with the hot lines mentioned above but this

and f-ck if my keystyles are too long, i express myself thru these pieces
that just means that you dont have the attention span to sit down and read it

killed it,

but yeah this joint WAS long as hell... lol

Good work!!

[m 0 s e s]

good lookin' yall .. sorry about the length my mind dont stop working once it gets going.

[Ecliptik]

lol @ avalon about the liquified line...lol

anyways...seems like you stepped it up while you been gone moses...good look