View Full Version : ||ALPHA||TheMan080.....VS.....Soul Deep||0-0 VOTES UP||
theman080
06-06-07, 11:49 AM
VERSES DUE BEFORE SUNDAY
For a battle to be legit each person will have to vote in two other battles. This will keep things movin regarding votes...
VOTES
Each vote should be well explained, vote on whatever criteria you want but explain your point of view and leave any bias out of it, no courtdog votes...
3-0 is a KO
First to 4 for decision
VERSES
Each verse can be between 15-20 lines...
No Biting
No Feeding
Soul Deep
06-06-07, 06:11 PM
1,2
Soul Deep
06-06-07, 06:37 PM
Beast of the woods, You? Sheep of the farm:evil:
Creep on my prey, so he wont be alarmed
Death’s in the air, the danger is on
Murder you slow, yea im deadly but culm.
I spit fire, hot lyrics burn ya brain
But da flow dat come wit it just numbs the pain
This dude is lame
Steped up to get buried in shame
U Gotta spark, but Im droppin bombs like Hussein
This nicca pu$$y, rip um like a magnum wrapper
Just go away, like Farve from the Greenbay packers:yes:
Lyrical Masta, words touch souls like Pasters
Soul Deep superb to all these emcees slash(/)actors
Niccas shiver like leaves, Im da storm dat approaches
Bars ferocious , watch um run for cover like roaches
It’s S-D, now who wanna play a game called holes?
Hollow tips, pierce ya body and burn your soul
Heat I form....
Leave my challengers deformed
Burned and torn
Nicca shoulda turned when warned....
Theman, dont realize what he facin yet
A blue flame flow dat'll make Satan sweat....
So I laugh when theman steps up to da throne:king:
Eat um alive, throw his remains in the pile of bones:evil: ..........
:smoker: ........
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Fucc dat im still in da zone, Freak on da mic, I cant leave this girl alone
Lost the screws in my head, on da mic my thoughts blow
Think you da sh*t, but im diareah wit da flow
Think you tuff, till i roll you up like clay doe
have you lookin like kano(mortal kombat)
Matta fact i will say no.........more
Ghost
Soul Deep
06-08-07, 10:38 AM
Are we really gonna wait till sunday??
theman080
06-08-07, 10:52 AM
Who the fukk is Soul Deep, ya scripts depiction of innocent victims
Probably an autobiography, fulfill it when this rivalry's finished
I style on gimmicks, undeniably supplyin the business
Your body of work make survival, a buyer's market has it die in a minute
Eager for the kill, stagger for a sec I'll put this ***got to his death
I'll draw heat, just to jump the gun and put a dagger in ya chest
Taggin up the best, bombin a gimmick like action-comdey writtens
Soul afraid of g ****, only rises after all the drama is finished
On the real, you got out the first round to be pounded and turned down
To get to ya skill level, I'd be drillin to I got to Yao Ming's first house
Ya words will depart, they say less is more, you really took it to heart
The bullet will be next, I tried to pen a close match, but butchered ya part
Burnin the crime scene, you better skate, you aint workin the grind G
If punchlines power verses...
Your's a 'blackout' like Ocean flicks when Bernie & Don leave
Ya not ready to take crowns, jumpin in shyts creek, belly-flop face down
What the fukk do you expect from Soul, its best died wit James Brown
I'm spiteful in rap, but your a good act, so its delightful to clap
Bet it hurts that you'll only get noticed, when checkin writers I sliced in my past
Lining an epitath before hand as a sequel to the eulogy in fact
They wanted a shining obituary for ya, but I aint a good enough writer for that
theman080
06-08-07, 10:53 AM
sunday is when they due, most will drop before hand, vote whenever
Ecliptik
06-08-07, 10:54 PM
well....this was expected....soul spit some weak stuff...and theman just pit a little better....flow, punches, etc all out matched..simple as that to me...
Vote: theman080
no need for a long ass explanation to be honest...
sorry if thats what you wanted..
Cali_Bud
06-09-07, 10:38 PM
Honestly there really is no need for a long drawn out explanation. 080 took this one, it wasn't even close.. Soul Deep's verse was very,very simplistic and the attempted punches weren't hitting thier target very hard at all. 080's flow was steady and he just came harder line for line he beat Soul Deep.
vote: theman080
Theman080 gets this, better punchs, rhymes were better, flow was better,
soul deep didnt raise the bar from the last round, and his rhymes were simple.
Ecliptik
06-12-07, 02:14 PM
Ko?
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