SOHH TOURNEY||RD. 1||.....TheMan080 vs Ecliptik.....(1-1 VOTES UP)||

[theman080]

For a battle to be legit each person will have to vote in two other battles. This will keep things movin regarding votes...

VOTES
Each vote should be well explained, vote on whatever criteria you want but explain your point of view and leave any bias out of it, no courtdog votes...

3-0 is a KO
First to 4 for decision

VERSES

Each verse can be between 15-20 lines...

No Biting
No Feeding

[Ecliptik]

lol @ gettin 080 first round...

If you think this a BOLD move...

........................................................................ ..................... how's this for a change..

theman can't spit on my level, it's like he's Truely In$ane..
Ain't new to the game, i'm know for just bringin the pain..
And brutally strain the brain of a DON thinkin he reign..
Or holdin the thrown, clip air lines over ya dome..
Show you the chrome til thewoman click heels...wish they was home..
Even when takin a piss, ya still ain't holdin ya own..
Cause you only drop hot lines....on cellular phones..
My mandibals foam, spit and melt ya jaw to the bone..
Hand you ya dictionary, try and read it aloud on ya own..
Test and get thrown, i toss scripts attackin, i won't..
Kiss and make up....wit the next top model of SOHH..(Vocab Pretty Boy)
If clip don't spit for a week, why you callin it hope..
My punches raisin hell, you bruised callin the pope..
Swallow and choke, like ya words ain't easy to eat..
I'll give a penny for ya thought because ya talkin is cheap..
theman HUNT done stunt ya growth, it makes no sense..
Why ya battle game on lower levels then ya flow and vocab is..
This kiss of death will stunt wit the maggie, like a simpson kid..
And have you leave sonned....kissin ya daddy like lil wayne did..

now get ya lips off me....niqqa...go listen to 'one mic' or somethin...

[theman080]

Ahh shyt, thought your post was just a check in...

Ya shallow & weak, an amatuer hour coward who feels empowered thru speech
Those lines were slim pickings, my meatier (meteor) verse will have em showered wit heat
Take a sour defeat, Ecliptik been in the back seat while I ravage his soul
I'm runnin shyt, you only feelin the driver when my club shatters your skull
When the crowd put the hands up during ya verse, dont cloud the situation
Thay aint feelin ya vibe, just sheilding from the debris of my retalliation
All you packin is forces, like a George Lucas box-set, attack ya misfortune
That shyt you write in microsoft wont even save em, the hard-drive embarrassed to store em
That filler has em in a Golden State, but no up-sets are due for you dogg
You'll be headin to the 'loser's round' like the last group of dudes at a bar
Flippin the scripts, you got pre-written spits that aint progressin to nothin
My verse is improv(e), you could add 'E" but he aint capable of it
A career lime-lighter, you mime fighters in hope that you'll rhyme tighter
And I like the way you mirror my flow, the reflection makes me shine brighter
Your an imigrant to sohh, ignorant in flow and are considered as a ho
I'm writin this on the fly, so I can drop the bomb and see it sizzlin as I go

[Ecliptik]

son of a b*tch...lol....good sh*t 080....

*waits 4 outcome*

[Casion]

theman can't spit on my level, it's like he's Truely In$ane..
Ain't new to the game, i'm know for just bringin the pain..
Decent opener. .5
And brutally strain the brain of a DON thinkin he reign..
Or holdin the thrown, clip air lines over ya dome..
Kind of filler, but the rhyming was dope. .5
Show you the chrome til thewoman click heels...wish they was home..
Even when takin a piss, ya still ain't holdin ya own..
Nice play on the name and real good punches. 1
Cause you only drop hot lines....on cellular phones..
My mandibals foam, spit and melt ya jaw to the bone..
Nice **** right here too, good punches. 1
Hand you ya dictionary, try and read it aloud on ya own..
Test and get thrown, i toss scripts attackin, i won't..
Kiss and make up....wit the next top model of SOHH..(Vocab Pretty Boy)
Aight, this is ok ****. No serious punch or anything but it's solid rhyming. .5
If clip don't spit for a week, why you callin it hope..
My punches raisin hell, you bruised callin the pope..
Filler and I think an attempted punch, but it's weak ****. 0
Swallow and choke, like ya words ain't easy to eat..
I'll give a penny for ya thought because ya talkin is cheap..
The punch was solid, nothing special. .5
theman HUNT done stunt ya growth, it makes no sense..
Why ya battle game on lower levels then ya flow and vocab is..
Another not so good attempt, it didn't really flow well but you did get the point across. .5
This kiss of death will stunt wit the maggie, like a simpson kid..
And have you leave sonned....kissin ya daddy like lil wayne did..
Nice ending, real good. 1

All around pretty good verse, had some real fire punches and a good flow for the most part. But it did have some filler, some punches that didn't connet, and some **** that I just wasn't feeling.
5.5/9 = 61

Ya shallow & weak, an amatuer hour coward who feels empowered thru speech
Those lines were slim pickings, my meatier (meteor) verse will have em showered wit heat
Fire opening, crazy rhyming with a real dope as hell punch. Best opener I've seen so far in the tourney. 1
Take a sour defeat, Ecliptik been in the back seat while I ravage his soul
I'm runnin shyt, you only feelin the driver when my club shatters your skull
Another nice as **** punch with some more dope rhymes. 1
When the crowd put the hands up during ya verse, dont cloud the situation
Thay aint feelin ya vibe, just sheilding from the debris of my retalliation
Nice multisyllabic rhyming, kinda filler but it's good. .5
All you packin is forces, like a George Lucas box-set, attack ya misfortune
That shyt you write in microsoft wont even save em, the hard-drive embarrassed to store em
The punch was kinda weak, and the flow was bad. Trying to cram too many words into one line. 0
That filler has em in a Golden State, but no up-sets are due for you dogg
You'll be headin to the 'loser's round' like the last group of dudes at a bar
Some more fire punches right here. Real good ****. 1
Flippin the scripts, you got pre-written spits that aint progressin to nothin
My verse is improv(e), you could add 'E" but he aint capable of it
Hm, I don't really know what you were going for here whatever it was it definitely didn't connect. 0
A career lime-lighter, you mime fighters in hope that you'll rhyme tighter
And I like the way you mirror my flow, the reflection makes me shine brighter
Ha, this was a real real good punch right here. 1
Your an imigrant to sohh, ignorant in flow and are considered as a ho
I'm writin this on the fly, so I can drop the bomb and see it sizzlin as I go
It would been good in the mid of the verse, but for your ending it just really wasn't strong enough. .5

You had real real strong punches, and your rhyming was real smooth and intelligent. But your flow got real choppy at some tiems and a couple of your punches really missed the mark.
5/8 = 63

Vote: TheMan080

[Soul Deep]

Ahh shyt, thought your post was just a check in...
Ya shallow & weak, an amatuer hour coward who feels empowered thru speech
Those lines were slim pickings, my meatier (meteor) verse will have em showered wit heat
Take a sour defeat, Ecliptik been in the back seat while I ravage his soul
I'm runnin shyt, you only feelin the driver when my club shatters your skull
When the crowd put the hands up during ya verse, dont cloud the situation
Thay aint feelin ya vibe, just sheilding from the debris of my retalliation
All you packin is forces, like a George Lucas box-set, attack ya misfortune
That shyt you write in microsoft wont even save em, the hard-drive embarrassed to store em
That filler has em in a Golden State, but no up-sets are due for you dogg
You'll be headin to the 'loser's round' like the last group of dudes at a bar
Flippin the scripts, you got pre-written spits that aint progressin to nothin
My verse is improv(e), you could add 'E" but he aint capable of it
A career lime-lighter, you mime fighters in hope that you'll rhyme tighter
And I like the way you mirror my flow, the reflection makes me shine brighter
Your an imigrant to sohh, ignorant in flow and are considered as a ho
I'm writin this on the fly, so I can drop the bomb and see it sizzlin as I go

Started off real strong, but fell of just a little in the middle and towards the end, feelin Dat reflection line thou, shi was ill.

theman can't spit on my level, it's like he's Truely In$ane..
Ain't new to the game, i'm know for just bringin the pain..
And brutally strain the brain of a DON thinkin he reign..
Or holdin the thrown, clip air lines over ya dome..
Show you the chrome til thewoman click heels...wish they was home..
Even when takin a piss, ya still ain't holdin ya own..
Cause you only drop hot lines....on cellular phones..
My mandibals foam, spit and melt ya jaw to the bone..
Hand you ya dictionary, try and read it aloud on ya own..
Test and get thrown, i toss scripts attackin, i won't..
Kiss and make up....wit the next top model of SOHH..(Vocab Pretty Boy)
If clip don't spit for a week, why you callin it hope..
My punches raisin hell, you bruised callin the pope..
Swallow and choke, like ya words ain't easy to eat..
I'll give a penny for ya thought because ya talkin is cheap..
theman HUNT done stunt ya growth, it makes no sense..
Why ya battle game on lower levels then ya flow and vocab is..
This kiss of death will stunt wit the maggie, like a simpson kid..
And have you leave sonned....kissin ya daddy like lil wayne did..

"Even when takin a piss, ya still ain't holdin ya own.." *good shi*
"My punches raisin hell, you bruised callin the pope" *whoa*
This kiss of death will stunt wit the maggie, like a simpson kid..* dat maggie shi is played out.. heard it way too much*

Man i gotta say eliptick took this, i mean, dude was just hittin you wit solid lines, da flow was bannanas...

VOTE-Elipitick( lets see if i spelled it right with out lookin)

[Soul Deep]

damn, guess not

[theman080]

1-1, Up

[Propaganda]

theman can't spit on my level, it's like he's Truely In$ane..
Ain't new to the game, i'm know for just bringin the pain..

-just flowin'...nothing going on here

And brutally strain the brain of a DON thinkin he reign..
Or holdin the thrown, clip air lines over ya dome..

-lol looks like you're jacking his steez...just flowin'

Show you the chrome til thewoman click heels...wish they was home..
Even when takin a piss, ya still ain't holdin ya own..

-and the first punch is thrown...no fresh twist on the old concept

Cause you only drop hot lines....on cellular phones..
My mandibals foam, spit and melt ya jaw to the bone..

again, kinda played but it still works...2nd line cool imagery

Hand you ya dictionary, try and read it aloud on ya own..
Test and get thrown, i toss scripts attackin, i won't..

-more flowin'...still setting for the next bar

Kiss and make up....wit the next top model of SOHH..(Vocab Pretty Boy)
If clip don't spit for a week, why you callin it hope..
My punches raisin hell, you bruised callin the pope..

-ehhh, top model thing was corny and you kinda had to explain it afterwards...the pope punch was decent i guess

Swallow and choke, like ya words ain't easy to eat..
I'll give a penny for ya thought because ya talkin is cheap..

-nah

theman HUNT done stunt ya growth, it makes no sense..
Why ya battle game on lower levels then ya flow and vocab is..

-well its a nice direct shot at him, but it is a weak one

This kiss of death will stunt wit the maggie, like a simpson kid..
And have you leave sonned....kissin ya daddy like lil wayne did..

-not bad of a closer...


Ahh shyt, thought your post was just a check in...
Ya shallow & weak, an amatuer hour coward who feels empowered thru speech
Those lines were slim pickings, my meatier (meteor) verse will have em showered wit heat

-1st line had a nice tone, flow followed it thru, lol@that wordplay, it's so corny...but hey, it turned out to be pretty good punch

Take a sour defeat, Ecliptik been in the back seat while I ravage his soul
I'm runnin shyt, you only feelin the driver when my club shatters your skull

-i liked how you carried the concept thru both bars, decent hit

When the crowd put the hands up during ya verse, dont cloud the situation
Thay aint feelin ya vibe, just sheilding from the debris of my retalliation

-i liked the idea but its worded real awkward

All you packin is forces, like a George Lucas box-set, attack ya misfortune
That shyt you write in microsoft wont even save em, the hard-drive embarrassed to store em

-wooooah, stretched

That filler has em in a Golden State, but no up-sets are due for you dogg
You'll be headin to the 'loser's round' like the last group of dudes at a bar

-hmmm...its ok...i think you coulda flipped it alot better though

Flippin the scripts, you got pre-written spits that aint progressin to nothin
My verse is improv(e), you could add 'E" but he aint capable of it

-again, poorly worded, takes the air out of it

A career lime-lighter, you mime fighters in hope that you'll rhyme tighter
And I like the way you mirror my flow, the reflection makes me shine brighter

-cool, cool

Your an imigrant to sohh, ignorant in flow and are considered as a ho
I'm writin this on the fly, so I can drop the bomb and see it sizzlin as I go

-ehh, this was pretty weak



both verses were pretty underwhelming. i kind of expected better. E's verse was totally uninspired. it was full of filler and tiny rabbit punches. flow was tight in spots though. theman's had some cool ideas behind it, just the execution was off. also, the flow wasn't that good, especially for him.

its like E just didn't try to hit and theman tried but mostly missed.

overall, i'd say theman got it.

[#1rapper]

alright...

Theman

flow-8/10
content-7/10
punches-7/10
worpdlay-6/10

Ecliptik

flow-7/10
content-7/10
punches-5/10
wordplay-5/10

yeah so it was pretty easy for me to see that theman took it, ecliptik verse was lacking anything close to special, and theman your verse was pretyy ehhh worthy to, so yeah step the game up to both of yall

but yeah theman gets it

[theman080]

3-1

UP for final call

[faceillini]

I'm votin for the man because I believe these last couple of bars killed it
"Flippin the scripts, you got pre-written spits that aint progressin to nothin
My verse is improv(e), you could add 'E" but he aint capable of it
A career lime-lighter, you mime fighters in hope that you'll rhyme tighter
And I like the way you mirror my flow, the reflection makes me shine brighter
Your an imigrant to sohh, ignorant in flow and are considered as a ho
I'm writin this on the fly, so I can drop the bomb and see it sizzlin as I go"

ECLIPTIC, you had some alright lines, however they seems a bit dated and basic. You flow was real nice..I think you just need to step it up a little.

Great battle

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