SOHH Tourney||RD. 1||.....#1Rapper vs Cali_Bud.....(3-2 VOTES UP)||

[theman080]

For a battle to be legit each person will have to vote in two other battles. This will keep things movin regarding votes...

VOTES
Each vote should be well explained, vote on whatever criteria you want but explain your point of view and leave any bias out of it, no courtdog votes...

3-0 is a KO
First to 4 for decision

VERSES

Each verse can be between 15-20 lines...

No Biting
No Feeding

[#1rapper]

I starve to start shyt...so ill get like a surgen and cut ya heart quick
Dont bark bytch...i spark more punches then a martial arts flick
Your a partial narc trick...cali bud...pow you suck...i control the points
After i bash your ass ill make ya body like ya name..rolled up joints
And drop the image of a thug and adopt the one a scrub...its just the truth
You dont bust and shoot.....c'mon you holding a gun?
You never even loaded up one or tote and rush some
And after i swarm your town and war you down, nobody will mourn ya clown
They call you cali cuz real compton thugs wouldn't let you put the fornia down
How can you be the best when you never even worn the crown
Your a grown up geek! preoccupied with vader and halo 3 beta
In there you might be the slayer but here your another wack player
Did you even notice how i switched the lines...to fit my rhymes
Ill kick the thought of beatin me outta your head...just say it slipped you mind
I dont falter with speech or often repeat..im the boss of this beef
And just like my keyboard my two hands can contol alter and delte all of ya feats

[Cali_Bud]

Hailing from the land of sinners but he ain’t ever left the porch/
Scorch his face with fire breathing rhymes like a living blow torch/
I’m here for war but you can tell he ain’t built that way/
Wondering how he went from #1 to unranked in one damn day/
Unbreakable rock from the inner to the outer core/
A swift warning I’ll scream 4!! Before the down pour/
I come out on top throughout all of my victims failed plots/
The spawn of sin I’m thick skinned so drop bombs instead of popping shots/
Bathing in hate, you should imitate instead of discriminate/
The rapper reaper, I don’t take prisoners I eliminate/
Silly buffoon they only tuning in to witness your certain doom/
Gazed into the future as a fetus and foretold that we would meet soon/
So I asked god for forgiveness and ripped him outta his mothers womb/
With only victory on my mind as I crafted his premature tomb/

[Ecliptik]

#1:
I starve to start shyt...so ill get like a surgen and cut ya heart quick
Dont bark bytch...i spark more punches then a martial arts flick
not bad....decent opening bar
Your a partial narc trick...cali bud...pow you suck...i control the points
After i bash your ass ill make ya body like ya name..rolled up joints
hit hard with a nice play off his name
And drop the image of a thug and adopt the one a scrub...its just the truth
You dont bust and shoot.....c'mon you holding a gun?
umm....no....did nothing for ya verse
You never even loaded up one or tote and rush some
And after i swarm your town and war you down, nobody will mourn ya clown
strong flow and sounds nice....but more filler then anything
They call you cali cuz real compton thugs wouldn't let you put the fornia down
How can you be the best when you never even worn the crown
not too sure what to make outa the line....it hits yet it doesn't:huh:
Your a grown up geek! preoccupied with vader and halo 3 beta
In there you might be the slayer but here your another wack player
ok multi usage and concept grasp'd, but not executed to the fullest
Did you even notice how i switched the lines...to fit my rhymes
Ill kick the thought of beatin me outta your head...just say it slipped you mind
lol...that was kinda hot...MAKE him say it was an accident at skoo..."ummm..i fell down the stairs"...lol
I dont falter with speech or often repeat..im the boss of this beef
And just like my keyboard my two hands can contol alter and delte all of ya feats
umm...you lost me when you brought up beef cause i don't remember any drama between you two...but the control, alt, delete line was pretty creative and end the verse well....

Overall i give the verse a 7.5/10...still a very aggressive verse

Cali:
Hailing from the land of sinners but he ain’t ever left the porch/
Scorch his face with fire breathing rhymes like a living blow torch/
good opening line...off the bat wit punches
I’m here for war but you can tell he ain’t built that way/
Wondering how he went from #1 to unranked in one damn day/
hot concept, although i feel like it's been used...it was still ok
Unbreakable rock from the inner to the outer core/
A swift warning I’ll scream 4!! Before the down pour/
lol....i understood this...most rolly wont, but it was fire
I come out on top throughout all of my victims failed plots/
The spawn of sin I’m thick skinned so drop bombs instead of popping shots/
blah....just plain filler...save it for open mic:thumbsdow
Bathing in hate, you should imitate instead of discriminate/
The rapper reaper, I don’t take prisoners I eliminate/
theres alot of ways you coulda trurk'd this line...but instead it turnd to filler...oh well
Silly buffoon they only tuning in to witness your certain doom/
Gazed into the future as a fetus and foretold that we would meet soon/
So I asked god for forgiveness and ripped him outta his mothers womb/
With only victory on my mind as I crafted his premature tomb/
had to combine the 2 bars cause the overall delivery was FIRE...although i wish you were able to utilize your bar usage more...the set up was still leading into a strong finish

Overall i give this verse a 8/10...started strong and ended strong

this so far is the best battle out of the 2 that are ready for votes in the tourney so far....2 differesnt style....aggressiveness and flow against punches and attempted punches (lol)....to me cali's verse was more consistant then #1's and had maybe 1 or 2 punches that stood out more, but this was still a VERY close battle....alot better then expected:yes:

Vote: Cali Bud

(theman 080 or #1...your choice on wether the vote is accepted or not...i was honest and non-bias)

[Soul Deep]

I starve to start shyt...so ill get like a surgen and cut ya heart quick
Dont bark bytch...i spark more punches then a martial arts flick
Your a partial narc trick...cali bud...pow you suck...i control the points
After i bash your ass ill make ya body like ya name..rolled up joints
And drop the image of a thug and adopt the one a scrub...its just the truth
You dont bust and shoot.....c'mon you holding a gun?
You never even loaded up one or tote and rush some
And after i swarm your town and war you down, nobody will mourn ya clown
They call you cali cuz real compton thugs wouldn't let you put the fornia down
How can you be the best when you never even worn the crown
Your a grown up geek! preoccupied with vader and halo 3 beta
In there you might be the slayer but here your another wack player
Did you even notice how i switched the lines...to fit my rhymes
Ill kick the thought of beatin me outta your head...just say it slipped you mind
I dont falter with speech or often repeat..im the boss of this beef
And just like my keyboard my two hands can contol alter and delte all of ya feats

Verse was was solid, had a few corny lines but for the most part you had a steady smooth flow, and some creative lines.


Hailing from the land of sinners but he ain’t ever left the porch/
Scorch his face with fire breathing rhymes like a living blow torch/
I’m here for war but you can tell he ain’t built that way/
Wondering how he went from #1 to unranked in one damn day/
Unbreakable rock from the inner to the outer core/
A swift warning I’ll scream 4!! Before the down pour/
I come out on top throughout all of my victims failed plots/
The spawn of sin I’m thick skinned so drop bombs instead of popping shots/
Bathing in hate, you should imitate instead of discriminate/
The rapper reaper, I don’t take prisoners I eliminate/
Silly buffoon they only tuning in to witness your certain doom/
Gazed into the future as a fetus and foretold that we would meet soon/
So I asked god for forgiveness and ripped him outta his mothers womb/
With only victory on my mind as I crafted his premature tomb/

I dunno, i was feelin this at first but then it got a lil boring, ya flow was kinda off i ,and i dont think you were as creative as #1, str8 verse thou,


VOTE=#100 RAPPER:laugh:

[Casion]

I starve to start shyt...so ill get like a surgen and cut ya heart quick
Dont bark bytch...i spark more punches then a martial arts flick
Nice opening, solid punches. 1
Your a partial narc trick...cali bud...pow you suck...i control the points
After i bash your ass ill make ya body like ya name..rolled up joints
Flow was off here, and a weak punch. 0
And drop the image of a thug and adopt the one a scrub...its just the truth
You dont bust and shoot.....c'mon you holding a gun?
You never even loaded up one or tote and rush some
Flow is way off here, might have worked vocally but not to text, and the punches were weak again. 0
And after i swarm your town and war you down, nobody will mourn ya clown
They call you cali cuz real compton thugs wouldn't let you put the fornia down
How can you be the best when you never even worn the crown
Alright, this is decent. Lot of rhyming and solid punches. .5
Your a grown up geek! preoccupied with vader and halo 3 beta
In there you might be the slayer but here your another wack player
I see what you were going for and it was a good attempt but the punches just don't connect. .5
Did you even notice how i switched the lines...to fit my rhymes
Ill kick the thought of beatin me outta your head...just say it slipped you mind
Smooth flow, not to hard on punches but I liked the rhyme and rythym of it. 1
I dont falter with speech or often repeat..im the boss of this beef
And just like my keyboard my two hands can contol alter and delte all of ya feats
Solid, but not strong enough for you ending. .5

Overall the verse was meh, you tried alot of punches which I respect but not a lot of them hit too hard, and there was also a big problem with your flow IMO. 3.5/7 which translates into a 50.


Hailing from the land of sinners but he ain’t ever left the porch/
Scorch his face with fire breathing rhymes like a living blow torch/
Flow is off just a little, but it was a solid enough punch and had some good rhyming, so that little fault can be forgotten. 1
I’m here for war but you can tell he ain’t built that way/
Wondering how he went from #1 to unranked in one damn day/
Nice punch. Good job playing off the little material you have to make a solid personal. 1
Unbreakable rock from the inner to the outer core/
A swift warning I’ll scream 4!! Before the down pour/
This is alright, but it kind of seems like filler to me. .5
I come out on top throughout all of my victims failed plots/
The spawn of sin I’m thick skinned so drop bombs instead of popping shots/
This is good too, but once again it seems a lot like filler and weak self hype. .5
Bathing in hate, you should imitate instead of discriminate/
The rapper reaper, I don’t take prisoners I eliminate/
Good **** right here. Some self hype yes, but this is self hype done right. 1
Silly buffoon they only tuning in to witness your certain doom/
Gazed into the future as a fetus and foretold that we would meet soon/
Seems out of place in this battle and over all pretty weak. 0
So I asked god for forgiveness and ripped him outta his mothers womb/
With only victory on my mind as I crafted his premature tomb/
Man, you kinda died off at the end here. Ending did not hit hard at all. Almost as if you were just scrambling for bars to close this **** with. 0

Verse was solid at best, good punches and I was feeling it all the way through even though there was a little filler, but then you just died off at the end. 4/7 which is a 57

Vote: Cali_Bud

[theman080]

Ecliptik's vote is fine...

Anyway...*cracks knuckles*

I starve to start shyt...so ill get like a surgen and cut ya heart quick
Dont bark bytch...i spark more punches then a martial arts flick
Your a partial narc trick...cali bud...pow you suck...i control the points
After i bash your ass ill make ya body like ya name..rolled up joints
And drop the image of a thug and adopt the one a scrub...its just the truth
You dont bust and shoot.....c'mon you holding a gun?
You never even loaded up one or tote and rush some
And after i swarm your town and war you down, nobody will mourn ya clown
They call you cali cuz real compton thugs wouldn't let you put the fornia down
How can you be the best when you never even worn the crown
Your a grown up geek! preoccupied with vader and halo 3 beta
In there you might be the slayer but here your another wack player
Did you even notice how i switched the lines...to fit my rhymes
Ill kick the thought of beatin me outta your head...just say it slipped you mind
I dont falter with speech or often repeat..im the boss of this beef
And just like my keyboard my two hands can contol alter and delte all of ya feats

VS

Hailing from the land of sinners but he ain’t ever left the porch/
Scorch his face with fire breathing rhymes like a living blow torch/
I’m here for war but you can tell he ain’t built that way/
Wondering how he went from #1 to unranked in one damn day/
Unbreakable rock from the inner to the outer core/
A swift warning I’ll scream 4!! Before the down pour/
I come out on top throughout all of my victims failed plots/
The spawn of sin I’m thick skinned so drop bombs instead of popping shots/
Bathing in hate, you should imitate instead of discriminate/
The rapper reaper, I don’t take prisoners I eliminate/
Silly buffoon they only tuning in to witness your certain doom/
Gazed into the future as a fetus and foretold that we would meet soon/
So I asked god for forgiveness and ripped him outta his mothers womb/
With only victory on my mind as I crafted his premature tomb/

there was a surplus of filler in this one, #1 had a smoother flow and when he decided to throw punches they were better then the ones Cali was coming with. Wordplay was ehh, most of it was pretty basic, there were a few semi-gems in there, both had a nice aggressive feel to it.

In the end, I gotta give it to #1, his read better, and since the punches were on an even level to me that takes it...Cali you have the battle style down pat so dont change it, just try to incorporate harder punches with some wordplay...I thought you were gonna merk him with the 'spawn of sin' shyt but it ended up being a so-so punch....anyway

V/#1

[Mukel]

#1 rapper gets this in my opinion,
i liked his rhyming style, his punchlines and flow.

Cali buds was ok, but it was just to much filler and not enough bite!

[W.I.Z.E.]

I starve to start shyt...so ill get like a surgen and cut ya heart quick
Dont bark bytch...i spark more punches then a martial arts flick]
Your a partial narc trick...cali bud...pow you suck...i control the points
After i bash your ass ill make ya body like ya name..rolled up joints

weak opening. Focused on flow and that "punch" line was cornny.

And drop the image of a thug and adopt the one a scrub...its just the truth
You dont bust and shoot.....c'mon you holding a gun?
You never even loaded up one or tote and rush some


ehh..nothing special here and the flow dropped off.


And after i swarm your town and war you down, nobody will mourn ya clown
They call you cali cuz real compton thugs wouldn't let you put the fornia down


We have liftoff...nice azz flow...good direct punch. Creative and funny. Some might say the first line was filler with good flow to set up the next line. I wouldn't though.


How can you be the best when you never even worn the crown
Your a grown up geek! preoccupied with vader and halo 3 beta
In there you might be the slayer but here your another wack player
Did you even notice how i switched the lines...to fit my rhymes
Ill kick the thought of beatin me outta your head...just say it slipped you mind

The Halo line was kinda funny. "Wack Player"...(cringe) what is this the early 90's. Who say's this nowadays. I liked the last line of this part.

I dont falter with speech or often repeat..im the boss of this beef
And just like my keyboard my two hands can contol alter and delte all of ya feats

Pretty strong ending. Overall this verse was very inconsistent, flow, content and just plain overall. Let's see what Cali Bud has to say.

[Ecliptik]

^cali has said something....it's RIGHT UNDER #1....lol

[W.I.Z.E.]

Hailing from the land of sinners but he ain’t ever left the porch/
Scorch his face with fire breathing rhymes like a living blow torch/
I’m here for war but you can tell he ain’t built that way/
Wondering how he went from #1 to unranked in one damn day/


simplistic...and weak...


Unbreakable rock from the inner to the outer core/
A swift warning I’ll scream 4!! Before the down pour/
I come out on top throughout all of my victims failed plots/
The spawn of sin I’m thick skinned so drop bombs instead of popping shots/


What does being thick skinned have to do w/ dropping bombs vs. shots.


Bathing in hate, you should imitate instead of discriminate/
The rapper reaper, I don’t take prisoners I eliminate/
Silly buffoon they only tuning in to witness your certain doom/
Gazed into the future as a fetus and foretold that we would meet soon/
So I asked god for forgiveness and ripped him outta his mothers womb/
With only victory on my mind as I crafted his premature tomb/

This BY FAR was the best part of your verse. But it left me thinking were was this fire the rest of the song. ahh....in the end #1 rapper gets this by a slim margin. If your last few lines were like the rest of your verse you would've got this.

[faceillini]

I'm sorry Cali Bud, your flow was off and on and you really had no punches.
#1rapper, you won this just because you had more punches (even though they were simplistic)-you had them in there.

VOTE=#1rapper