SOHH TOURNEY||RD. 1||.....Mukel vs Soul Deep.....(4-1 Soul Deep)||

[theman080]

For a battle to be legit each person will have to vote in two other battles. This will keep things movin regarding votes...

VOTES
Each vote should be well explained, vote on whatever criteria you want but explain your point of view and leave any bias out of it, no courtdog votes...

3-0 is a KO
First to 4 for decision

VERSES

Each verse can be between 15-20 lines...

No Biting
No Feeding

[Mukel]

Might aswell start this sh*t off, start off easy for you,
will go harder at ya boy next round.


Soul deep, you should know i roll deep,
with a crew full of peeps, strapped to the teeth,
im cool like keith, but a hot headed cat,
when i hit you in your jaw, its like im using a bat,
im savage like that, im not an average rapper,
im an above average rapper, the don dapper,
im bomb harder than the enola gay,
you say what you gotta say, all i know is im about to slay,
soul deep, lurk in the shadows and creep,
no mountain to high, no hill to steep,
you aint sh*t to mukel, you dont wanna beef,
im a leave your defunt body in the water, near the coral reef,
your tall but lean, your small between, you wanna battle for 3,
sh*t Im'a make it a battle for you to breathe!
Im'a breeze through you, your worthless like a sneezed on tissue,
this is an issue, that im gonna address,
soul deeps a virgin, he aint ever had sex,
he's a 14 year old kid, who pervs on his mom,
he's only just started to get a hard on on!

[Soul Deep]

Finnaly, The time has come
Sittin back, sippin on Oj and rum
I do this for fun....
Mukul get blowed out like mucus, im sick
Relentless barz, You?..you get stuck like pick's...
Avoided like Sh*t, so you go home and type
Entered the tourny, only to loose the fight...
Eclipse form when i talk and i grip the mic,
sound-waves turn 2 heat-waves, now im gettin hyped...
Time to explode on my challegener
Ya sh*t's dull, but I hold the xcaliba...
Take heads of like highlander
Nothing left for the scavengas...
When im done with you
This tourney not that big, but still theres no room for you...
Bullets pierce thru, then you layed unda soil
Heat to ya head, shoot till ya brain boil
Ya man's?.. i'll have him in the latest coffin
Hollow tips... dive in his waves like dolphins
It's a rap..Altoid, you a tic tic
Im Done wit dis clown for now, Where my drink at?...:cool:

[the puppetmaster]

mukel

Soul deep, you should know i roll deep,
with a crew full of peeps, strapped to the teeth,

- Um, Ok.

im cool like keith, but a hot headed cat,
when i hit you in your jaw, its like im using a bat,

- Simple, really really simple.

im savage like that, im not an average rapper,
im an above average rapper, the don dapper,

-WTF homie?

im bomb harder than the enola gay,
you say what you gotta say, all i know is im about to slay,

- You're taking way too long to get to your point kid, especially in such a short verse.

soul deep, lurk in the shadows and creep,
no mountain to high, no hill to steep,
you aint sh*t to mukel, you dont wanna beef,
im a leave your defunt body in the water, near the coral reef,

- Blah, maybe in a live battle but this didn't translate well at all to text

your tall but lean, your small between, you wanna battle for 3,
sh*t Im'a make it a battle for you to breathe!

- This was ok technically. You're an extremely slow starter attack wise.

Im'a breeze through you, your worthless like a sneezed on tissue,
this is an issue, that im gonna address,
soul deeps a virgin, he aint ever had sex,

- Wow. Famo this is just way too simple and played out the whole somebodys a virgin thing to be effective.

he's a 14 year old kid, who pervs on his mom,
he's only just started to get a hard on on!

- Bad way to close out. I only found one of your stanzas mildly amusing. No hate so hopefully you can take constructive criticism well. You started out way too slow, self hype is all fine and dandy but its all about timing. You can't babble for 8 bars about urself then throw out soft hits. You flow well, its just the ouch factor, its missing.

Soul Deep

Finnaly, The time has come
Sittin back, sippin on Oj and rum
I do this for fun....

- Ok, setting the mood I spose

Mukul get blowed out like mucus, im sick
Relentless barz, You?..you get stuck like pick's...

- overused blown out concept, but aight

Avoided like Sh*t, so you go home and type
Entered the tourny, only to loose the fight...

- Nothing of note here.

Eclipse form when i talk and i grip the mic,
sound-waves turn 2 heat-waves, now im gettin hyped...

- the sound waves set is decent. here we go.

Time to explode on my challegener
Ya sh*t's dull, but I hold the xcaliba...

- Filler.

Take heads of like highlander
Nothing left for the scavengas...

- Filler.

When im done with you
This tourney not that big, but still theres no room for you...

- Rhyming You with You. No, No, No. .. don't do it.

Bullets pierce thru, then you layed unda soil
Heat to ya head, shoot till ya brain boil

- Garbage.

Ya man's?.. i'll have him in the latest coffin
Hollow tips... dive in his waves like dolphins

- decent imagery on the waves/ dolphins line.

It's a rap..Altoid, you a tic tic
Im Done wit dis clown for now, Where my drink at?...


- That closing was pitiful dude.

Okay, you're making me suspicious about your two good lines because you had so much filler in your verse. You have a hot/ cold, hot/ cold style from what I can see here. When you were on with the wave lines you were decent, when you were off it was borderline embarrassing. No disrespect, just callin what I saw. Stick to the imagery and tone of this 'Eclipse form when i talk and i grip the mic,
sound-waves turn 2 heat-waves, now im gettin hyped..."
and stay off that guntalk shyt, you don't need it.



. .. i'mma give my nod to soul deep here. there was a lot of filler here boys, I dunno if ya'll rushed verses and jumped the gun too quick or what but there was a bit of fluff in here. Anyhow yet in still props to both of you for getting this shyt kicked off. Hopefully the tourney can go off without hitches or no-shows.

Peace to both combatants



-P-

[#1rapper]

mukel
flow-7.5/10-times were it was hot..times were it was extremly forced
punches-2/10 not really any punches thrown..alotta self hype is evident
wordplay-2/10 the battle to breathe line was aiigh
attitude-8/10 liked the hard approach..never eased off
content-5/10 aloota filler that dont say much..alotta this shyt coulda been used on just about anyone
overall 24.5/50
soul deep
flow-7/10- was pretty basic which is fine for battle rappin..i guess
punches-5/10- lines seemed off and on with the punches..like filler..hit..filler.hit
wordplay-0/10- dolphin line stood out but..but thats not wordplay
content 6/10- overall your shyt had better hits and and staryed just a bit more personal
attitude-6/10-really wasn't feeling the overall layout of your shyt
overall 24/50

[Cali_Bud]

Mukel
I didn't like the ending at all, this was very average.
im cool like keith, but a hot headed cat,
when i hit you in your jaw, its like im using a bat,
no mountain to high, no hill to steep,
you aint sh*t to mukel, you dont wanna beef,
^^^these 4 lines I wasn't feeling at all and kinda felt like they were fillers.
he's a 14 year old kid, who pervs on his mom,
he's only just started to get a hard on on
^^I felt like this probably would have been good in a live battle but certainly not written
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Soul Deep
Your ending was better , but again your drop was very average also
Ya man's?.. i'll have him in the latest coffin
Hollow tips... dive in his waves like dolphins
Avoided like Sh*t, so you go home and type
Entered the tourny, only to loose the fight...
^^ I liked these lines but feel you could have added more
Take heads of like highlander
Nothing left for the scavengas...
When im done with you
This tourney not that big, but still theres no room for you...
^^felt like this could have been left out all together
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I think both drops were very average but with what was presented I'm gonna have to go with Soul Deep

[Ecliptik]

well...to be dead honest...i thought both verses were wack....but i'ma break it down somewhat...

mukel....the flow scheme sucked to be honest with really extra regular punchline (not that i'm the greatest) but the intro started off ok...until i read the 2nd bar....then it was 2 thumbs down to me from there....nothin really special to stand out for a quote....

soul deep....this is hands down the sorriest verse i've seen from you....i guess cause you saw some extra regular sh*t.....you thought you could do the same except throw maybe a few more then blah punches and win off of flow...and well....thats what happened...lol....nothin really to quote aswell....

not hatin on either one...just bein honest....and i know soul deep coulda came alot harder but instead just signed in and said hello....

VOTE: Soul Deep

[Soul Deep]

I gotta take it ez on dude, I didnt wanna hurt his feelings......

N-E ways, it's a wrap,

Next victim same treatment, uno

[Casion]

Actually Deep, you technically didn't win yet because it's 3-1 as of now. But I'm voting for you to give you the victory.

Neither verse was fire, kinda far from it. Alot of filler in both, but Mukel's **** was so so so simple that it was at prechool levels. Soul deep at least had some sort of rhyme complexity, two, three sylably rhymes. As for punches, I barley saw anything that mad an impression. Overall I give ti to Soul Deep, but don't get me wrong, neither verse was anything special.

[theman080]

4-1

Good shyt on the votes, Mukel goes to the Omega Bracket and Soul Deep to the Alpha Bracket...good shyt from both...

Stay Up

[Soul Deep]

Actually Deep, you technically didn't win yet because it's 3-1 as of now. But I'm voting for you to give you the victory.

Neither verse was fire, kinda far from it. Alot of filler in both, but Mukel's **** was so so so simple that it was at prechool levels. Soul deep at least had some sort of rhyme complexity, two, three sylably rhymes. As for punches, I barley saw anything that mad an impression. Overall I give ti to Soul Deep, but don't get me wrong, neither verse was anything special.


I dont eat breakfast fast..