"Whats Dat Noise"

[paranormatic]

We da people da majority n still get neglected,
Ain’t no bloods or crips in my city but brothas still get tested,
Protect ya neck f da necklace self defense is a great investment,
I back smack kids wit da furious five n dey still fail to get da message,
And my cities infested wit slugs not the ones you pour salt on n dissolve,
But da ones when you sense danger in da chamber click bang ya den revolve,
Problem solved rise anew as a new day sprung,
N da Toxic in da water cause natives to develop a third lung,
Enveloped in da trap steadily dying young,
And when they heard intelligent rap dey ask where I’m from,
A place where alarm clocks stay set to the first of the month,
And my phaser set to stunt till the worst of ‘em come,
So Witness the one eyez numb disable words on da tongue,
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[#1rapper]

We da people da majority n still get neglected,
Ain’t no bloods or crips in my city but brothas still get tested,
Protect ya neck f da necklace self defense is a great investment,
not the best line, but still has good attitude in it
I back smack kids wit da furious five n dey still fail to get da message,
And my cities infested wit slugs not the ones you pour salt on n dissolve,
But da ones when you sense danger in da chamber click bang ya den revolve,
honestly didnt like the nail line, but it ended up good
Problem solved rise anew as a new day sprung,
N da Toxic in da water cause natives to develop a third lung,
Enveloped in da trap steadily dying young,
no filler here, keepin on pace...
And when they heard intelligent rap dey ask where I’m from,
A place where alarm clocks stay set to the first of the month,
And my phaser set to stunt till the worst of ‘em come,
So Witness the one eyez numb disable words on da tongue,
ended aiigh...coulda been worse coulda been better
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..all in all i say the flow i something good in the making...and the content needs work..shyts been done before...im not gonna score this outta ten but i will say the attitude in the drop was defeintly a plus side to it...stay up