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Mukel
05-16-07, 08:01 PM
We could quite be, the embodiment of love at first sight,
when i first met you, i was short for words,
tongue tied, suprised, alarmed by your beauty,
your a cutey, and wow what a booty,
dancing on the stage to fall out boy, it was good for you,
but not my cup of tea, i bought you a drink, and i sat beside ya,
though we'd only just met, i wanted to get right behind ya,
bless your heart, and your looks are unmatched,
oh my god what a f*ckin catch, im a cool cat but felt like a screech,
wanted to have dinner candle lit with walks on the beach,
move to the sticks, kick back, and roll away the years,
but you'd never let it go, your peers never like'd me,
your ex boyfriend, he always tried to fight me,
never thought we'd ever be, could we be, of course we could,
just wait and see, to be continued, next week at the venue

Cali_Bud
05-16-07, 08:08 PM
I liked this. You could have added a hook and a little bit more bars but this was good.

Mukel
05-16-07, 08:19 PM
Thanks bud, I really didnt like it myself, but im just trying on a bit of fiction
rather than personal sh*t