Straight off the T-O-P

[sexydeltagirl]

Verbal Intercourse is what we engage in...
An exchange of wordy specimens are what we are trade'in..
He gives me straight bars while I break mine down into fragments..
So this way I can pause n' think then switch of my dialect...
He goes first as he's sayin how is flows are legendary..
And unlike things already passed he's history in the making...
I'm watchin his movements and they way he moves his hands...
His b-boy stance has me in a trance....
Legs slightly seperated, back straight, shoulders strong...
He's like moving poetry....
And after a while his words make no sense to me...
I've zoned out tryna 2 not to let him get the best of me..
So the spotlight is on me and it's my time to shine...
But instead of blowin him away my words are sub-prime...
Can't get my words together I'm sayin things I don't wanna say..
So I tell him he got me this time...
But he tells me to keep going and it'll come to me...
So I keep going, and before I know it the words are makin sense...
I'm telling him how I'm far from the average..
And I know I've been here before so this life is just practice...
He's feelin my story and he's quite intrigued...
Yet I end it with a bit of mystery...
Cause I'm still not sure of my destiny...
He's quite now and so am I...
We don't know the next words to say so we just smile...
I'm hoping it was as good for him as it was for me...
This is the end of our verbal intercourse...
I'm in desperate need of a cigarette...

[homeyjay]

Verbal Intercourse is what we engage in...
An exchange of wordy specimens are what we are trade'in..
He gives me straight bars while I break mine down into fragments..
So this way I can pause n' think then switch of my dialect...
He goes first as he's sayin how is flows are legendary..
And unlike things already passed he's history in the making...
I'm watchin his movements and they way he moves his hands...
His b-boy stance has me in a trance....
Legs slightly seperated, back straight, shoulders strong...
He's like moving poetry....
And after a while his words make no sense to me...
I've zoned out tryna 2 not to let him get the best of me..
So the spotlight is on my and it's my time to shine...
But instead of blowin him away my words are sub-prime...
Can't get my words together I'm sayin things I don't wanna say..
So I tell him he got me this time...
But he tells me to keep going and it'll come to me...
So I keep going, and before I know it the words are makin sense...
I'm telling him how I'm far from the average..
And I know I've been here before so this life is just practice...
He's feelin my story and he's quite intrigued...
Yet I end it with a bit of mystery...
Cause I'm still not sure of my destiny...
He's quite now and so am I...
We don't know the next words to say so we just smile...
I'm hoping it was as good for him as it was for me...
This is the end of our verbal intercourse...
I'm in desperate need of a cigarette...
Bravo, Sexxy Dee - This one's quite a stray from your usual rifts dare i say watered down but in a good way. I enjoyed it though it allowed me to image your verses more. Keep venturing through those open doors my Sister of great skills. felt...

[sexydeltagirl]

Bravo, Sexxy Dee - This one's quite a stray from your usual rifts dare i say watered down but in a good way. I enjoyed it though it allowed me to image you verses more. Keep venturing through those open doors my Sister of great skills. felt...
Thank darlin, I was just letting if flow from the brain no dramatics just words I guess. It turned out alright I could twirk it a little bit but then it wouldn't be straight off the top...lol

I hope all is good with you my dear....

[ONE_MIC_ETERNAL]

I really enjoyed the imagery and the realism of a moment that made
both parties feel sublime in rhythim, its like I was seeing a form become without the intricies of communication between you and him but could
hear a language from another stand point. Its really nice and isnt
full of anger or cursing and is something like a sunset.


stay good,

[sexydeltagirl]

I really enjoyed the imagery and the realism of a moment that made
both parties feel sublime in rhythim, its like I was seeing a form become without the intricies of communication between you and him but could
hear a language from another stand point. Its really nice and isnt
full of anger or cursing and is something like a sunset.
stay good,
Hey, Thanks for the feedback on this joint! an actually this is far from something I would normally write and I'm glad you enjoyed it. I was a little unsure of how it would be preceived but I'm glad I posted it...

I'll be on the lookout for some of your work.....