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Cali_Bud
05-09-07, 05:21 PM
Cali_Bud

In a CA high rise, overlooking this hell hole so many call home/
It’s either live by your word and your balls or die by the f*cking chrome/
Floating at heights once perceived to be unreachable/
You non believers were presented with facts now branded as unteachable/
You sheeple are not reasonable and you flock to lies/
F*ck prejudice mainstream America I'm severing all ties/
So my takeover should not be seen as a surprise/
Projected thoughts through real eyes is what you can't realize/
You ain’t ready for the war I bring - please just fess up/
I'm ahead of my time - yall still playing catch up/




The Orange Soda Kid

On the manhattan balcony, L smoke through the nose/
rain soaked streets, dirty like the prose/
that grows by my insides then flows through my windpipes/
spit through gritted teeth, but only at midnight/
grey hoodie on my shoulders, a soldier/
battle through dark times that's colder/
weak MC's speak on nothing but killing/
i just flip my tongue to reach a higher ceiling/
it's a fact my minds righter can forsee without hindsight/
verbal crime fighter with designs to dim the light of/
those that bite rhymes and swipe lines - please just fess up/
i'm ahead of my time - ya'll still playing catch up/


Catch up n*ggas.....

MaCRonI
05-09-07, 06:09 PM
This drop was straight......ayo make sure to keep ya verse cohesive. This was a simple concept...coulda used a hook ya mean...feels like something's missing. Dope verse tho...i like how ya had that multisyllable tihng going in yours Cali. Orange S, I like ya concise verse and didn't overstrech ya bars.....

7.2/10

Cali_Bud
05-10-07, 01:00 AM
Yeah big up to Orange Soda kid. I really liked his verse on this 1