Put To The Test pt.1

[#1rapper]

Hands shoved in my hoody, ears plugged with headphones
I walk in a dead tone everybody else already spead home
My leg bones quiver and seem shaky and wacked
Im replaying the act that just occured in the shack
Me davis and mack were making a track
We were spitting something about waving a gat
And all of a sudden we heard a thumping on the front door of the spot
We looked at each like surely its not Georgie and Josh, I looked at my watch
It was way past 2 and we had some debt that was way past due
The knocking continued...Davis looked at Mack
I ran to the back and Mack took off his hat
The wooden door cracked...They came in with hasteness
Any minute now they would be flooding the basement
And putting guns in our faces, Davis started shaking
Maybe he was comteplating his son in the making
We all stood side by side as Josh And George figures blocked the door
Josh walked in and said "You got my four?"
None of us answered..we had 2 at the best
Josh drew in a breath and then threw with his left
He hit Mack in the chest and Mack crashed on the desk
And started hacking for breath
George quickly followed up and hit Davis with a wild uppercut to his upper gut
I knew fighting back would only end bad for me, so i waited to get hit
But to my surprise i didn' get shyt, they told me like this

"Were taking your friends as collateral man,
you got until tmrw to put the grands in our hands."

They roughly shoved my buds out of the basement,and spead to across town
Im feeling real lost now, I know theres no way to pay
So I picked up the gat and thought of Davis and Mack
We were the craziest katz...well thats what we said on the tracks
It was time to turn fiction to fact i strapped the switch to my back
And left the shack....

to be continued

[Cali_Bud]

Hot drop good to see you back #1. Props.

[theman080]

Joinin the Courtdog collection of verses that end with "To Be Continued" and throw away the topic so that it never sees the light of day again...

good **** though

[#1rapper]

Im on the block of their spot and i can hear rap from a boom box
What the fukk was i thinkin, i should of brought two glocks
I quickened my step any hestitation i would be visting death
Sweat dripped off my neck,I was outside the house, they were all on the deck
My piece was concealed but i still felt as if they all knew the deal
I moved through the crowd kinda musing around looking for Josh or George
The music was loud, guys were foolin around..they didn't no wat was in store
I saw em chillin...in the corner surronded by girls and men
i figured the clip would give me four to ten...so too many misses im dead
As if hearing what i said in my head, Josh looked direcrtly at me
His expression was happy, o shyt..he thought i had the cash
Now was my chance, i walked over to him ready to blast
"You got the money?" Josh asked like a don

"Yeah." I answered trying to keep my calm

I reached with speed and felt the heat in my palm
As soon as it pulled out *****es ducked and pu$$ies scattered
With a shaky hand i shot at josh and watched his blood splatter
Geogre was pulling his piece so i aimed quick and fired two at his teeth
It wasnt a good hit, it was like one in the cheek,he slumped dead in his seat
The place seemed vacant...and for a second i thouhght i'd might make it
My heart started racin and i went to find the friends of mine
I ran to the door...tripped and slammed on the floor
I figured i had a one minute to four before all was fukked
i got up and franticly searched for the basement
In a couple of seconds i faced it..and hurried down the stairs
Hoping to see that my pows were there...
What i saw was rope and turned over chairs...a window was broken and open
Aww shyt they already bounced, i turned ready to pounce
And a fist hit my mouth, I stumbled and fell
I looekd up and saw a silencer...to the muffle the shell
I quickly tried to aim up but before i sprayed up i was flamed up
The bullets made me hover and drop i felt blood on my crotch
But before i was laid to rot a thought suddenly popped
For about a minute i was the biggest thug on the block.

[Ecliptik]

this is pretty hot....koo flow and all...but i agree wit theman....lose the title...lol

[#1rapper]

good lookin on the feedback