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boriquaking
04-11-07, 03:49 PM
ohh how i hate that other man.
i thought she could be mine,
her voice was so divine,
she was in my thoughts all the time.
ohh how i hate that other man.
thought about her everyday,
"i love her" i would always say,
couldn't keep my emotions at bay.
ohh how i hate that other man.
the man i speak of hurt her,
but i guess she didn't care.
ran back into his arms,
left me stranded right there.


so now i am here,
patching up my wounds.
for my heart is not broken,
but very badly bruised.

on very rainy days,
i wonder what could of been,
if she had given a chance to me,
and never run back to him.

ohh how i hate that other man

boriquaking
04-11-07, 10:32 PM
do you guys like it??

Trojanman
04-14-07, 01:40 PM
can't relate BUT this ****s alright. *applauses*