Heartbreak

[Cali_Bud]

She got what you want and you got what she needs/
But you don't want her company you wanna put her on her knees/
you know you gone break her heart,you should stop right where you start/
Thoughts of permiscuity & humility tear your lovers soul apart/
This sh!t is such a mess, situation got you stressed/
Feel like you searching for love on a twisted never ending quest/
N!gga you know you wrong when yo @$$ ain't in the right/
Be the man you should be and fix all this drama tonight/
Man you already gone good thinking is outta your range/
Head telling u yes, but the brain u getting making ya brain think strange/
She's dying inside and you know that your the reason why/
Trying to comprehend how you can look her right n the eye & tell a lie/
But u got game for days claiming she your only boo/
Wondering if this f*cked up song is addressing you/
Your stories ain't adding up she done had it up to here/
Her nosy ass homegirls telling her what she need to hear/
Now the roles are reversed and she won't pick up the phone/
Trading hanging out wit your boys for sleepless nights at home/
Apologies are not enough and before you know it she gone/
Then the heartbreak set's in when you realize that your all alone...

[Ecliptik]

wow...i can't even give a comment...or say what i wanna say....lol

good **** though

[Soul Deep]

i woulda just replaced her fucc it, girls come n go.

str8 ish thou oc, flow was good, da concept was good vocab was good. str8 lil story.

ez

[Cali_Bud]

Whether positive or negative, feedback is always appreciated. From here on out imma try and get 2 everybody's work because you put time and effort into it and jus wanna kno how good it is. Yeah I'm no sap but true story lol. It happens to everybody.:cool: