"Trot East"

[paranormatic]

Walkin,
Often…the road less followed,
Crack vales n glass from broken liquor bottles,
Easy on da throttle,
Stead fast can’t grasp day after tomorrow,
Sorrow, blood, tears,
A primal fear of dyin,
Ensnared by da devil,
To gods will nobodies complyin,
Economic tyrants,
Cast shadows dats giant,
From skyscrapers dey manifest clouds dat’ll block da sun out,
Descendants of slaves in dem spite rage violence,
Draw da gun out,
Youth lack guidance,
Old folks fear’em,
Scared of freedom,
Knowledge is da serum,
Wisdom is da seed but not so appealin,
Seekin sexual healin
livin da flesh cuz of da feelin,
instillin in da mind,
oh boy dey villains wit da rhyme,
dey’ll make it rain on azz crops,
plus dey’ll kill you wit da 9,
Resiliently inclined to grind,
Mindless puppets,
Distort da truth rob da people and think nothing of it

[Soul Deep]

Dis was str8 oc, you got good vocab and i could see you got sense, flow was ight

wish it was a little longer thou

ez

[Ecliptik]

Dis was str8 oc, you got good vocab and i could see you got sense, flow was ight
wish it was a little longer thou
ez

umm...iono what vocab you talkin about...lol...anyways....i wasn't gonna comment the rhymes cause it was just "eh" to me...

i was gonna say i know you like to write alot....but just because you feel up the forum wit all your spits....doesn't mean people are gonna look...you just look like an ass...

try not to post so many rhymes at once...show some patience...lol

[Cali_Bud]

I actually liked this 1. I thought this was a good post.