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the orange soda kid
03-16-07, 06:04 PM
amongst bums that blow snot rockets on train tracks
huddled in a corner beggin' god for they brain back
i stand half nervous, feel like i'm on the same path
yayo in the nose, man i gots to tame that
devil in the system i invited him in
split me in two now i'm the most righotoues twin
but for real what really gives me the right to begin
complaining about a problem that killed most of my kin
and i was aware but at the same time i thought i was better
thought i could weather a storm and just come out - never
instead came out with my spirit stolen, fearing no one
thoughts perverted, thoughts of murder, a lot of murmurs
from friends, but i choose to ignore
man for real, what THE **** do i need that for
so now i'm back on that new path, gots to come out swinging
i was out on my feet, but the bell's just now ringing
and that's why i'm singing...

energy
03-16-07, 06:34 PM
Yes sir... that **** is no good for nobady. The yay I mean...
This was easily the realest piece I've read from you.
No unecessaries. Well done kido..
Good drop.

Cali_Bud
04-01-07, 01:51 AM
Good drop man. I liked the post. Your drops have been good. Keep it coming man.

Soul Deep
04-02-07, 10:51 PM
its ight, nah mean ya flow was str8, and you kept it str8 from da heart.. respect kid.. keep um comin

Soul Deep
04-02-07, 10:52 PM
its ight, nah mean ya flow was str8, and you kept it str8 from da heart.. respect kid.. keep um comin