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Buddah MAC
03-07-07, 11:23 PM
can't pass the mic long as passion stays past-tense
cast shadows on your doubts til they accept absence
perminantly, terminate the regional accents
being borders, catch me in Borders, book signing while your hook lining
superficial's portrait, had enough of your more ****
let's lessen your impression by forcing your forfeit
resting in blessing while your forced agression stressin
was old in adolesence, now casts eclipsing crescents
on your aura, explorer of the everyday unappreciated
run circles round sedated, some say my first place fated
current day stay celebrated as aftermath anticipated
to enter everywhen elated, dine on discourse debated
kept full forever and a sequel, equal to every man's potential
reached, each one teach, DJ throw on the old school Impeach
break to make the modern in context, this conquest
is to end the oligarchy and even odds of the contest
we all working through, what we working to?
air carries open questions to where answers blend in blue
the hue of reflection, path to insight direction
spark the infection til the people ill with insurrection
fever, make believers out of self-doubters, devout heard
spoken keeping partygoers woken, long after dawn has broken

energy
03-08-07, 02:32 PM
I love Buddah Mac.
There I said it. LOL
Honestly though, you're one of my favorites to ever post here.
Can I hear an audio of anything of yours anywhere?

pix
03-09-07, 06:33 PM
we all working through, what we working to?
air carries open questions to where answers blend in blue

niiiice ...i can hear those lines

and "cast shadows on your doubts til they accept absence" is a GREAT line. inspiring in a kick-ass way. maybe it just hit home to me, but its been instantly archived in my head

check out some of my pieces, let me know what you think.