The artist

[Dmac]

the biology of man
is poetic and rythmic,
as first formed and shaped by sand and water
which then turns to life mud,
is set ablaze and cooked by doves with matches
then fleshed and boned by times loyal servants day and night,
married by the bishop sun, and high priestess moon,
and blessed by the harshest and best conditions of the elements,
so formed by heat and cold, rain, wind and sunshine,
emotions are born, to be immortal for the life of the mortal,
and as life's cake begins to rise,
and form pictures with its eyes,
and kicks at the constriction that is the half moon cover
implanted over the world,
the blood of the son flows through the red vines,
and is absorbed by the former white leaves,
meant to stop it from spreading all over the canvas
which was created by the one named God, the artist
-excerpt from a piece im writing

[energy]

Wow... I really enjoyed that.
I've been ****ting on everyone here who thinks the word's "****" and "*****" are poetic. On this piece alone, and it's only an excerpt, this right here makes you the best I've read in the "poetry" forum.
Thanks.

[sexydeltagirl]

Wow... I really enjoyed that.
I've been ****ting on everyone here who thinks the word's "****" and "*****" are poetic. On this piece alone, and it's only an excerpt, this right here makes you the best I've read in the "poetry" forum.
Thanks.
You just can't accept that everyone is not going to feel the same way you do about someones work. That's a sign of being immature, maybe you should work on that.

[sexydeltagirl]

the biology of man
is poetic and rythmic,
as first formed and shaped by sand and water
which then turns to life mud,
is set ablaze and cooked by doves with matches
then fleshed and boned by times loyal servants day and night,
married by the bishop sun, and high priestess moon,
and blessed by the harshest and best conditions of the elements,
so formed by heat and cold, rain, wind and sunshine,
emotions are born, to be immortal for the life of the mortal,
and as life's cake begins to rise,
and form pictures with its eyes,
and kicks at the constriction that is the half moon cover
implanted over the world,
the blood of the son flows through the red vines,
and is absorbed by the former white leaves,
meant to stop it from spreading all over the canvas
which was created by the one named God, the artist
-excerpt from a piece im writing
Hey U, I really enjoyed this piece - I wouldn't mind hearing this read over some nice jazz....
Props!

[energy]

You just can't accept that everyone is not going to feel the same way you do about someones work. That's a sign of being immature, maybe you should work on that.

It seems that it is YOU who
"can't accept that everyone is not going to feel the same way you do."
You're just going to have to work on that.
Please write more grade school, **** me "poetry" and continue to lecture me on my immaturity. I'm placing you at about 16 years old now and it's the reason you've been getting a pass. You probably haven't realized this yet but this is me being nice to you.
Stop being so hurt by the fact that I think your poetry is wack.
If you're really as confident as you pretend to be,
this wouldn't be an issue for you.
I thought you wanted me to stop replying to your attempts at poetry?
Why are you still talking to me?
Don't you have hooker lyrics to write?

Dmac, my apologies for interupting your thread man.
Again, best piece I've read here in weeks.

[sexydeltagirl]

It seems that it is YOU who
"can't accept that everyone is not going to feel the same way you do."
You're just going to have to work on that.
Please write more grade school, **** me "poetry" and continue to lecture me on my immaturity. I'm placing you at about 16 years old now and it's the reason you've been getting a pass. You probably haven't realized this yet but this is me being nice to you.
Stop being so hurt by the fact that I think your poetry is wack.
If you're really as confident as you pretend to be,
this wouldn't be an issue for you.
I thought you wanted me to stop replying to your attempts at poetry?
Why are you still talking to me?
Don't you have hooker lyrics to write?
Dmac, my apologies for interupting your thread man.
Again, best piece I've read here in weeks.
:laugh: @ you think I'm hurt cause you don't like my work. I never said I wanted you to stop replying in fact I encouraged you to read more of my work you are the one who said you wouldn't....

Naw I already know what your maturity level is I won't call you out on it anymore....

[energy]

Great then we're done?
good.. now I can sleep at night.
Best of luck to you.

[Dmac]

damn wuts goin on here?