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slave2aplaya
03-02-07, 03:12 PM
I knew you were there
See I felt your breath on my neck
Sending shivers down my spine
The only sign
I was sure our souls could intertwine
Im sorry
My comprehension was slow
I saw you too
In my minds eye though
baby
Ive been happy here
Sittin safe in my bubble
So much so
Thoughts of you
Have became such a struggle
Please
Let me get used to being me
As in being me free
As in I
If you love me
Set me free and let me fly
There was so much left unveil about you
That I could hardly exhale without you
Moistening my lips in anticipation
Of your words…
Of our silence
Blindly believing
You are my salvation
But baby
There nothing left of me
To save

You tell me I look so good
But you’re making me sick
I thought we could live off our love
But how can you only love me with your d*ck…?
I don’t want to be here any longer
My resolve is to be stronger
Baby believe me
Limbo is no fun
All I hear is our song
Im sure Im slowly sinking into hell
Oh well
At least
I knew you were there
See I felt your breath on my neck
Sending shivers down my spine
The only sign
You were just making sure I toe the line…


*G*

sexydeltagirl
03-29-07, 04:00 AM
Nice lady, I can def. identify with this.....

homeyjay
05-07-07, 04:06 PM
I knew you were there
See I felt your breath on my neck
Sending shivers down my spine
The only sign
I was sure our souls could intertwine
Im sorry
My comprehension was slow
I saw you too
In my minds eye though
baby
Ive been happy here
Sittin safe in my bubble
So much so
Thoughts of you
Have became such a struggle
Please
Let me get used to being me
As in being me free
As in I
If you love me
Set me free and let me fly
There was so much left unveil about you
That I could hardly exhale without you
Moistening my lips in anticipation
Of your words…
Of our silence
Blindly believing
You are my salvation
But baby
There nothing left of me
To save

You tell me I look so good
But you’re making me sick
I thought we could live off our love
But how can you only love me with your d*ck…?
I don’t want to be here any longer
My resolve is to be stronger
Baby believe me
Limbo is no fun
All I hear is our song
Im sure Im slowly sinking into hell
Oh well
At least
I knew you were there
See I felt your breath on my neck
Sending shivers down my spine
The only sign
You were just making sure I toe the line…
*G*

Man my bad I slept on this one, but man STP I just be diggin' ya style. The uniqueness interwoving rap and poetry (at least to me) I can relate to I sort of evolved from one to the other so I'm partial. I knew you'd return, so welcome back to the P.C. flats my Sister.

CSquare43
08-21-07, 01:07 PM
Bump.. Another good one...

slave2aplaya
11-03-07, 05:30 PM
Thank u so much guys, it means the most.

x