"the Way We Live"

[Ricky James]

This is a new track i just recorded let me know what you think of it?

http://www.soundclick.com/util/getplayer.m3u?id=5022732&q=hi

www.soundclick.com/rickyjames

[energy]

How come it doesn't rhyme?
The mixing of the song sounded fine but the lyrics and delivery were aweful.
I mean, you rhyme "trust me" with "why me"... that ain't even a polysyllabic rhyme scheme AND you got to repeat a word.
Besides the fact that the lyrics are effortless, the delivery lacks any semblance of passion or emotion. Booooooooooring.