Im the Truth

[kingofdayay]

(HOOK 1)
Y'all tellin a bunch of lies while im the truth,
I use to sell a bunch of dimes now im in the booth/
Im Ruth yall Bonds yall sh!t aint legit,
Stop making up stories man y'all need to quit/

(HOOK 2)
N!gga im the truth you can call me Pierce,
You don't want it wit that boy man he too fierce/
To you queers if you want it I will get you touched,
If you want to "pay the price" man im "too much"/

(VERSE 1)
People say I gotta way wit words,
I use to smuggle ki's in car tires across the border I got away wit birds/
They see Gudda it's the K-I-N-G,
Ya baby motha stay eye'n me/
Pack guns like the NCAA "tecs", "cals" a "mac" and I "pack 10"
Y'all are not among the elite so y'all are "wack" then
If y'all n!ggas is "actin" then I will be the "camera man",
And "shoot at the scene" wit the hammer man/
Hammers and ratchets come in "handy man" I stay wit tools,
I get to the point I aint got time to play wit fools/
Y'all dudes is not sh!t this for dudes that aint got sh!t,
I write rhymes on the toilet because "I drop hot sh!t"/
See you might think you good but I think you not dawg,
You better "catch up" if you think you "hot dawg"/
I got y"all singin the song im in a league of my on,
All I need is weed and a bong wit my fatigue and my chrome/

(HOOK 1)
Yall tellin a bunch of lies while im the truth,
I use to sell a bunch of dimes now im in the booth/
Im Ruth y'all Bonds y'all sh!t aint legit,
Stop making up stories man y'all need to quit/

(HOOK 2)
N!gga im the truth you can call me Pierce,
You don't want it wit that boy man he too fierce/
To you queers if you want it I will get you touched,
If you want to "pay the price" man im "too much"/

(VERSE 2)
I said if you want to "pay the price" man im "too much",
Im hungry and ready to eat and y'all look like lunch/
I see that y'all tryin to make it hard for a G,
I taught y'all well I guess the apple dont fall far from the tree/
I son all y'all n!ggas im head and in charge I run all y'all n!ggas,
I backdown to no man especially none of y'all n!ggas/
Y'all puttin in a lotta "work" but im the "boss",
So if I have to "fire" then y'all would have to "retire"/
Now I aint sayin that ya gotta quit,
It's just ya "talkin outta ya ass" "sayin a lotta sh!t"
Didn't I teach y'all to show some respect,
Y'all no ya dead "wrong" next time ya betta come "correct"/
Wit all that jibba jabba and ya spoken lies,
Y'all can't "see me" when ya go "open ya eyes"

(HOOK 1)
Y'all tellin a bunch of lies while im the truth,
I use to sell a bunch of dimes now im in the booth/
Im Ruth y'all Bonds y'all sh!t aint legit,
Stop making up stories man y'all need to quit/

(HOOK 2)
N!gga im the truth you can call me Pierce,
You don't want it wit that boy man he too fierce/
To you queers if you want it I will get you touched,
If you want to "pay the price" man im "too much"/

[energy]

"Y'all dudes is not sh!t this for dudes that aint got sh!t,
I write rhymes on the toilet because "I drop hot sh!t"/
See you might think you good but I think you not dawg,
You better "catch up" if you think you "hot dawg"/"

Is that what's hot now? Rhyming words to themselves?
This rap **** gets easier everyday.
Other than that bull**** right there, the flow was on point.
Not my style but why should it be?
I can hear the flow but again, content could be upped.

[kingofdayay]

"Y'all dudes is not sh!t this for dudes that aint got sh!t,
I write rhymes on the toilet because "I drop hot sh!t"/
See you might think you good but I think you not dawg,
You better "catch up" if you think you "hot dawg"/"
Is that what's hot now? Rhyming words to themselves?
This rap **** gets easier everyday.
Other than that bull**** right there, the flow was on point.
Not my style but why should it be?
I can hear the flow but again, content could be upped.
I see that a lotta dudes on here is influenced by Nas just by how they use a bigger vocabulary

But im influenced by Jay-Z, he uses a smaller vocab but it has a lot of meaning and is metaphorical

If you look at it close you can see more than just simple rhymes

[energy]

Nas is boring.
I'm inspired by Janis Joplin.
Don't be another Jay-Z.
Be the one true Kingofdayay.
Otherwise, I'll just listen to Jay-Z.
Nobody does jay better.

[Conduit]

I see that a lotta dudes on here is influenced by Nas just by how they use a bigger vocabulary
FALSE. Nas is wack. Bigger vocabulary? You mean multisyllabic words? Like metaphorical? Is that a big one? Come on. Generally speaking... if you have to defend your rhyme, then something's wrong.


But im influenced by Jay-Z, he uses a smaller vocab but it has a lot of meaning and is metaphorical
If you look at it close you can see more than just simple rhymes
Right. We all know who Jay-Z is and what he does. The problem is it looks like you're just trying to do the same thing, which is kinda lame. It may, unfortunately, get you a deal... but it's lame.

It looks like you might have the talent do something original, so i say go for it. Let us see what you can do.

[kingofdayay]

FALSE. Nas is wack. Bigger vocabulary? You mean multisyllabic words? Like metaphorical? Is that a big one? Come on. Generally speaking... if you have to defend your rhyme, then something's wrong.
I said bigger vocabulary as in bigger words

And if you can't find any metaphors and punchlines in my verse's than you must be blind

Right. We all know who Jay-Z is and what he does. The problem is it looks like you're just trying to do the same thing, which is kinda lame. It may, unfortunately, get you a deal... but it's lame.
Does this even make sense

What do mean am I tryin' to have multi's? Yes

Am I tryin' to have the best flow? Yes

Am I tryin' to have the metta's? Yes

I never knew havin' all those things was lame

It looks like you might have the talent do something original, so i say go for it. Let us see what you can do.
Original? You speakin' as if im stealin' lines from Jay