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Conduit
02-16-07, 03:17 PM
written to El-P/Cannibal Ox "Pigeons" beat. Here's "my verse"

Call it the politics of opposites, and imagine with me (fathom, sissy) how it all came to be: my thin feet damaging fantasies // I sport two wings, and a span that steals tans from the faceless, on a block where you get props on a superficial basis // I am in flight, my back facing the basics, and with my gut in your face I can see why you'd call the air up here tasteless // but let's take a step back first: I've got two feet and a reach that takes me from a-to-b efficiently // but you'd rather walk in misery // ill-equipped? no. the company you keep feeds your energy... you all are chicks with chapped lips that pick at the seeds of a city's memory // my diet is filled with a quiet I can't really speak on, and in my quest to find the words my arms spread across to cover the surface area lost in my descent from... well... let's call it a premature landing // but I'm not supposed to be here, my fly was fashioned to fill air // my flight was made to instill fear, my fear is that in a year I'll be halfway into the heavens and all you doves will still be chillin' here // dude, I was bred fused with points of view too numerous to count, check the quills still in my right fist that move air in large amounts // on account of your own apathy I'm led to think you love the street... and I used to, but I got over it... now I carry your dreams in my feet

pix
02-16-07, 03:36 PM
rapper kids and paper grownups need to sit down and observe what top notch writing is

so unique and dope

not simply because its a metaphor...whatever. metaphors aren't new. but that you chose to take a small little common bird that nobody notices make it the subject of high-end lyrical description...and THEN oh btw, it also fits PERFECTLY into the metaphor

energy
02-16-07, 03:49 PM
ConFusion! ****in A man!
Get in the audio thread already.

"on account of your own apathy I'm led to think you love the street... and I used to, but I got over it... now I carry your dreams in my feet"

You've always been one my favorite writes on this ****.