Dominion- I.N.$.A.N.E. $.H.A.N.E.

[In$ane $hane]

( I )Insanity, Intelligence
Intermittently intertwined in Ignorance
Infrequently idolized by idiots
I, Insane…Imperial Idealism
Immersed in internet Imperialism (Taking Over SOHH! lol)

( N )Noble New York Newcomer, Naturally Nice
Noticeable narcotics…Never…Nowise

( $ )$ For money cheese cheddar or Cash
Dollars, Benjamins, Washingtons or Cabbage

( A )No abasing
Agree, as you analyze an actual assailant
An animal abominating as Ammunition accumulating
An adroit author
Alphabetical slaughter…

( N )NO!

( E )Eating enemies economy, endangering
Each envious enemy, entity expiration


( $ )$ The almighty dollar, beans, bread, bankroll
Chips, currency, dinero, ducats, banknote

( H )Hip-Hop’s heavenly heat holdin husband
Huey P heart, hustling, Halo hole hunting
Hellbound, heavily hacking hemophiliacs
Hurt like humping hepatitis hoes, No hats

( A )An abusive acronym assault, asshole aiming
AAHHCCHHOOO! Apologies, an adolescent ailing ( I’m Sick! lol)

( N )Nevertheless nauseating, no ***** nicer

( E )Eardrum easer, entertainer, exciter
Exaction, emcee evacuation
Engage Emcee exfoliation

[Sleeps Thoreau]

ehh
this is gimmicky. No real intuitive or intense creativity here. The templet was already set for you, all you had to do was pull together random adjectives, and alot of it is filler.

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because even papoose wouldnt even break 3.5 with me

[In$ane $hane]

Gimmick? lol...4 what? its jus an Sohh post, but i understand where u commin from, but truthfully i've been doing da spellbound rap style way b4 i even hear da papoose shyt,it was suppoesd 2 be like an acronym concept,nuthin like alphabetical slaughter.
even ma name $.H.A.N.E. is supposed to mean $ Has All Ni99az Envious...so wen papoose & other rappers was doing it more & more,it kinda put a dent in ma style...even if u see ma battle witt Mr.November,i end it witt

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[theman080]

This was gimmicky, been flipped before and is bound to be flipped many times in the future but still...I could fukk wit it for the most part. Bein with the style you were goin for on this drop you were bound to run head on into some filler but it wasn't too heavy. This was better then a lot of the drops I've seen from you but not as good as the ish I juz seen you drop...

In this case I think that you thought the style would carry further then it did...




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[#1rapper]

ppl seem quick to call this gimmicky..which it is...but even with that said its not bad..this type of shyt is hard to do and make sense, and you handled that aspect pretty well, it actually showcases your vocab to..and some advice would be to incorporate these words into all of your drops, trust me saying "i got gats that blast" over and over again gets tired..trust me i know

[#1rapper]

woops frogot to rate it

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[sn0man]

yikes this was a trainwreck, Ive seen way better from you though so Ill tune in next time lol

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[IvIdividual]

Oh man. Cheerleading? Not a good look.

(N)No!


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[Midnite]

I've written alphabeticals before, and I know that it's alot harder than it looks...but makes it difficult isn't coming up with random words, but coming up with words that flow and keep a message going...

unfortunately you got the random words without the message or theme...still, it ain't the easiest thing in the world to do...

I would grade you on this being a gimmick, because no idea is ever really original, Papoose wasn't the first to do it, he's just one of the best at it...

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like i said in your other piece, I've seen better from ya man, I'ma look forward to the next to see how you do