Dominion - Freestyle/Nothing but Actors 2

[W.I.Z.E.]

I’ll rupture your spine combustion when conducting the rhyme,
Orchestrating horn patterns with the drums and my lines,
The King of this jungle got girls tugging my vine,
Got a bundle of dimes, like bums hung on subway lines,
2051 my grandkids just left a note in my box,
And said Grand dad you just resurrected hip hop.
Each progression I drop lessons that confess in the spot,
Usher a new session, pressing coals for diamonds I’m not.
One of these cornball, I stonewall, State of the Union,
I’m porn yall, beat around the bush, when I bust off.

to Dust off,
Dustin Hoffman I rain man, meet parents contain fams, in distant and strange lands,

and slam tstt tstt tsst tsst...check

The lock Smith with Will power in “Pursuit of Happiness”,
Mad Man like Mel but the Christ’s not Passionless,
You Simp son and Duke your troops seek Hazard kid,
My style is like Brad and Jolie the way it’s having Kids.
Got a fiancé name Beyonce she’s a “Dream Girl”,
Sly as a Fox with “Ray’s” of hope for me to see her,
Nearly “Departed” went to the Matt,
Damon, Dillon, still son I’m Afflecked with hun,
Lopez, But Eva Mendes got me straight “Out of time”,
Washing tons of “Preachers Wifes” poutin on line
Straight from Houston, but I aint got a scar on my face,
Got Kevin Costner but no “Bodyguards” in the place.
In search of “Dead Presidents” a Menace straight up like Tate,
I saw “Flight Plan”, “Accused” Jodie Foster of rape,
Got a loft and estate, Enemy’s are tossed off the case,
Off the porch w/ my safe, or atm O’Shea can relate
Got Cubes of diamonds you aint seein’ like Jessica Alba,
Fantastic like me havin’ sex w/ Jessica Alba,
Beautiful Mind, Brandon Lee straight envision these crows,
Circlin’ on Hip hop, Cinderella (Man) best to get home

[Sleeps Thoreau]

The lock Smith with Will power in “Pursuit of Happiness”,

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i think this was the most clever line you had.. it wasn't as blatant as the others, and didn't lend you over to the gossip columns in its subtlety

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i wouldn't rate this too high because then i'd be advocating this whole (label it a freestyle and thats an excuse to throw away rhymes) trend that's going on in hiphop. There was no real format here, it was just line for line wordplay, and reading it line for line wasn't really advanced to me... for me if it was like line for line wordplay on intellectual philosophy or introduced cultural significance that exceeded 2007 pop culture i mightve been impressed.
But unless i hear this off the top of ur dome and can be convinced its really off the top of the dome

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[theman080]

Yo...

Even tho this was juz a freestyle it was still pretty good, I think I remember reading ya first version of this flip and it was a lot better. That one was on some real piff type ish if I'm thinking of thee right one. This one had a good flow and I enjoyed a lot of the references even if they may have been a little over-obvious at certain points. Ya multi syllable game was killin it too, this was a decent read just nothin totally groundbreakin, and I gotta deduct a bit just becuase I seen you flip this waaaaaaaaaaaay better...




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...ay yo, if I'm really fukkin off and you aint flip this topic before let me know, and I'm right then up that shyt, it was hot!

[#1rapper]

sshyt was enjoyable...all the movie flips i think have gone unnoticed...sure some of them were pretty plain and simple but it was consecutive in each line...it was a very strange mix up to me..the first part was better in flow and smoothness but the second part was better in content...maybe put those two togther??Maybe we should collab (LMAO)--jk

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[IvIdividual]

Clever. But I dont think this was stretching the boundries of your skill. This seemed more at home with you. A typical WIZE drop. I like the way you flipped several things... But it was just your ordinary schmodinary. Basic at that. Ima little disappointed at the content quality. Probaly one of the weekest on calibur wise.


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IvI

[W.I.Z.E.]

Clever. But I dont think this was stretching the boundries of your skill. This seemed more at home with you. A typical WIZE drop. I like the way you flipped several things... But it was just your ordinary schmodinary. Basic at that. Ima little disappointed at the content quality. Probaly one of the weekest on calibur wise.
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IvI

Yes I did a joint before..I'll repost cuz I can't find it here.

TWO...You're right AVK. I got lazy on the freestyle to a certain extent although the second part is not as easy as it may seem.

[Midnite]

The lock Smith with Will power in “Pursuit of Happiness”,

that line made me smile, lol....that was clever :laugh:

I agree though, this was a freestyle...so there wasn't too much thought put into it, but it was very enjoyable....yet, with the Dominion project we on, we wanna stretch the boundaries a bit, and considering your other joints would kill this...

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it was a fun read though