Found It

[Mukel]

I attack with the crack that 90% of all emcess lack,
as I grip on my sack wingin about how y'all are wack,
I regain my form and obstain from irate outbursts and fits,
to spit lyrical ****, miracle blip, knowing i flip with the hip hop I spit,
this is it, ive pulled myself up and out of this pit,
wipe of the dirt, my feets on solid ground now,
somehow i know that this worlds just been found,
new territory, home away from home,
kinda peaceful, even though i feel alone,
multiplicity, like michael keaton, cloning myself,
now theres millions of heathens so im surrounded by wealth,
hip hops alive in my mind in my soul,
the targets wide open, its my choice to achieve my goals,
keep running forward like its my only escape,
time to seperate myself from the rest of these apes!

[yaga]

Cool sh*t, man.

Read this aloud and the way it came off was ill. Had a really good cadence or whatever. If you could break lines down a bit more, maybe throwing some more "WHOA!" factor in the sh*t would be fire. But like i said, this sh*t is hot nonetheless.

I'm upping this because it's dope, man... our workshop thing has folks like you down on replies... so now more people will see it. Dope post.

[Mukel]

Thanks bud, I appreciate it

[W.I.Z.E.]

this is "ok" don't know if it should be upped but Yaga is the new man in charge...


oh yeah why do I think it's "ok". The flow and style was good but the content didn't wow me in any particular parts.

[Invisible Vision]

I felt the flow was pretty on point. Seemed like the bars were well measured... my biggest problem is there really wasn't a line where i felt like i'd say "this part was dope" overall it was pretty well written, but nothing really stood out.

i think i'm a tough judge though.... 2.5 maybe 3 outta 5....

... no disrespect, but why is this upped?