DOMINION: Eater Of Worlds

[sn0man]

To leave my stress soothed and managed
I make chess moves with planets
Roam the sands of time
bury flesh N bones sans the mind,
increst tombs with granite
A legion of nymphos who follow me
An army straight from files of cryptozoology
Scout realms of higher knowledge just to leave my will imposed on prodogies
Leave scripts posed as philosophies
plant seed through methods of hypno-masogony
Make asteroids wait and stand adherence
sit idly as I grant em clearence
Train enchanted spirits to rock unique verses(universes) When I Hand em lyrics
Grace planets with life, carve my face in satelites so they know its me
Drop xyclon, leave people dying globally
while reciting ancient scriptures of Mayan poetry
Evict entire planets with scyths to pry residents
molded from Syntheized Elements,
Calculating my minds relevence
erase humanities past then encrypt devine evidence
not known for empathy
since I embarked to scar my mark on angels who hark sympathy
My makeup is death, sparks render me
dot my frame wrought with dark energy

[Sleeps Thoreau]

To leave my stress soothed and managed I make chess moves with planets
----alright i don't know what is gonna follow yet but this line has already set a good tone with me. On some Rakim follow the leader mode.


Roam the sands of time bury flesh N bones sans the mind, increst tombs with granite
A legion of nymphos who follow me, An army straight from files of cryptozoology
----*BOMB* lol ok we know what follows now.


Scout realms of higher knowledge just to leave my will imposed on prodogies
----WHOA


Train enchanted spirits to rock unique verses(universes) When I Hand em lyrics
----quotable



Drop xyclon, leave people dying globally while reciting ancient scriptures of Mayan poetry
----WOW!!! this is deep! Mayan culture is on the rise in our consciousness right now.




Calculating my minds relevence, erase humanities past then encrypt devine evidence
not known for empathy since I embarked to scar my mark on angels who hark sympathy
My makeup is death, sparks render me and dot my frame wrought with dark energy
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Well here you impressed us with the metaphysical essence. You came time after time with lines that displayed your ability to be clever at graduating us into higher degrees and realms of grandiocity (i dont kno if that is a word).
Your referencing was beautiful! a piece like this can only enlighten. It kept energy up. The thing is that it is basically an excertion of ur strength. It's highly expressive as far as the historical and scientific connectedness it ties in with its relavence, but there is no real overall point. Ur flexing. And that is all good.. great wordplay, imagery, flow... this is an emcees rhyme. But as far as structure it doesnt delight me.. it doesnt bring me back and forth or convey any texture... its just like
I do this
Im capeable of that
even such and such couldnt stand up against..

still in comparison with some of the stuff ive read from u (which hasnt been alot) this is on another level

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[IvIdividual]

Ummm...You had a few nice lines in here but it just seemed like just another battle rap to me.

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IvI

[theman080]

I was up and down on this as I read it, you obviously got skill wit words and flow and whatot and the visuals were pretty crisp too so its not like it was bad. I just went from thinking its good to thinking its really good, I liked the whole idea and concept, this was solid...

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[sn0man]

bump

[sn0man]

nah, 3 ****ing joints don't speak for themselves

[#1rapper]

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alright let me break this down

Content-I thought you content was aiigh...like ive seen this type of drop done before..and ive seen it done worse and better..but you made it solid and never had any bad points

Flow- I liked the flow..had multis which i love..props on that shyt definetly a shining point in this drop

Consitency_ ehh..was up and down and even though it was mostly up thats why i gotta give u a 3 1/2 rating

props

[yaga]

nah, 3 ****ing joints don't speak for themselves

[W.I.Z.E.]

Maybe it's because I didn't expect that much (honestly). But yo. This was straight FIYAHH. I read the first few lines like..who da fluck is this kid. Then there was bit of a drop a few lines in but damn this was straight.

At some points the flow seemed stretched.

An army straight from files of cryptozoology
Scout realms of higher knowledge just to leave my will imposed on prodogies
Leave scripts posed as philosophies

The end fell off a lil from the beginning but overall I think this was good way of just explaining your immense magnitude and pressence when it comes to your craft. Good bragadocious.


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[In$ane $hane]

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alright let me break this down
Content-I thought you content was aiigh...like ive seen this type of drop done before..and ive seen it done worse and better..but you made it solid and never had any bad points
Flow- I liked the flow..had multis which i love..props on that shyt definetly a shining point in this drop
Consitency_ ehh..was up and down and even though it was mostly up thats why i gotta give u a 3 1/2 rating
props

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[In$ane $hane]

iight sorry sno,lol...this is y i gave u wat i did

Flow was good in some parts but in others...not so good. i also realized u went ova syllables too,but wat brought everything back was da lyrical content of this one,better some of da shyt i seen from u,but havent seen all dat much from u anyways...so its iight

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[Midnite]

i haven't seen much of your work prior, but this, i must say, was hot

you were very strong in parts

A legion of nymphos who follow me
An army straight from files of cryptozoology
Scout realms of higher knowledge just to leave my will imposed on prodogies
Leave scripts posed as philosophies

and

not known for empathy
since I embarked to scar my mark on angels who hark sympathy
My makeup is death, sparks render me
dot my frame wrought with dark energy


the rest of the verse was good, but not as strong, your lows weren't too bad, but compared to the strength of the quoted lines, it was a slight let up

overall a strong piece, i look forward to reading more from you

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[Invisible Vision]

To leave my stress soothed and managed
I make chess moves with planets
Roam the sands of time
bury flesh N bones sans the mind,
Not a bad start, clearly going to be abstract... but seeing as i enjoy that, i'm certainly intrigued by your word choices... also has a bit of a bobby digital feel to the start of it.

increst tombs with granite
A legion of nymphos who follow me
An army straight from files of cryptozoology This part seemed forced to me
Scout realms of higher knowledge just to leave my will imposed on prodogies However this line might be the best in the piece, simple approach, crisp wording, on a much bigger idea...
Leave scripts posed as philosophies
plant seed through methods of hypno-masogony filler, dancing
Make asteroids wait and stand adherence
sit idly as I grant em clearence
Train enchanted spirits to rock unique verses(universes) When I Hand em lyrics This flowed beautifully... and more importantly (to me) was a hot line... the kinda line i'd put on a tee shirt... and wear

Grace planets with life, carve my face in satelites so they know its me
Drop xyclon, leave people dying globally
while reciting ancient scriptures of Mayan poetry I can't help but think of S.free here... even though this isn't completely his style... i guess i'm just nostalgic... moving on.
Evict entire planets with scyths to pry residents
molded from Syntheized Elements,
Calculating my minds relevence
erase humanities past then encrypt devine evidencewans't crazy about the first few bars here, but hte last line pulled this section together
not known for empathy
since I embarked to scar my mark on angels who hark sympathy
My makeup is death, sparks render me
dot my frame wrought with dark energy

I don't know how exactly to word this.. The ending was dope, but i can't help but say that it wasn't really an ending. It was hot few bars, but didn't really provide closure to the piece... in my mind at least.

hope that was helpful

I would give this a three outta five.... so... <> <> <> i guess?