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sn0man
01-17-07, 02:04 PM
For cash and loot, n1ccas dont even ask to shoot
For cash and loot, n1ccas dont even ask to shoot
The dearly departed gettin speared over bargains

Regular friday hit the highway head to the club
Forgot the beef I had with dreads who got slugs
My crew breaks bread over blood but count me out
as I stop to park, shots ring out the rounds reach out
Didnt hear a thing, a black hole clouds my vision
I shoulda seen the assailants how could I miss em
the black veil consumes, Im nailed Im doomed, Death awaits
My body fails to move but somehow my soul levitates

For cash and loot, n1ccas dont even ask to shoot
For cash and loot, n1ccas dont even ask to shoot
The dearly departed gettin speared over bargains

Im show the past of how my goal of cash led to this
My Girl had a side thing with my man, they fvckn
A deal gone wrong they killed a connect, they hustlin
Now im the only rival to him settin up his own shop
I aint see the despise in his eyes I dont expect no shots
I see cold plots, guns cold cocked they waitin with a present
My b1tch strapped ready to bust and she 4 months pregnant
daddys gone and the kid never knew why he didnt know em
Even though I delivered Men to death I still owed em

For cash and loot, n1ccas dont even ask to shoot
For cash and loot, n1ccas dont even ask to shoot
The dearly departed gettin speared over bargains

In$ane $hane
01-17-07, 04:51 PM
Good story & shyt,but there's 1 thing wrong witt dis...I expected better,I opened this expecting it 2 be on some "Death Of a Salesman" shyt. But otherwise its aiight, could of been way better lyrically tho
6.5/10

sn0man
01-17-07, 04:58 PM
damn :( I need to step my game up

Invisible Vision
01-17-07, 06:39 PM
good job as a narrative... kids can look for more creativity, as they'll call it

but i think that it takes alot of creativity to be able to tell a story in a rhyme....


I've seen better from you, but that doesn't take away from the fact that this was pretty hot.

Child Proof
01-17-07, 06:46 PM
I thought it was hot...left me needing another verse or two though...you're nice with the story telling, that's not easy at all.