HipHop Was Dead

[Sleeps Thoreau]

still bored, still born
hip-Hop feels raw as the fillmore
before millions of headphones
checkin for vitals
dead on arrival
america's affinity fo' death
has left microphones wrecked
with icons gone in the same breath

i kill more_ciphers than
tobacco and hash dipped and twisted in wet
spit in debt to the inner depths that echo offa the chest
let go and cross inta a four cyl.ind.er porsch
with more horse wind.. than i be walkin these dogs in (smell that?)

it aint too often i get free
but it was bitting me, fighting me, pesky for me
to rhyme...
and it's definatelly on time as che
in water from the isles of lepracy to get to me
5 decades later to reference me
S.Free
like super nat spitting B.I.G. hefty
except.. i get tremers and see red when it exits on beats
all you coul' do is ask if i want tea?/ if i get any sleep?

but a deadened breed__of music.. leaves dead emcees__who use it
melodies induced in such doses with medusa
was diagnosed in 94 with emotion true enough
to make my flow seem like rigamortis chewed it up
and left the corpses of latch key kids
on each coast of a maps key

when prison bids get you dap
u know uve adapted to livin this rap
and it was a wrap before it did get you clapped

[theman080]

still bored, still born
hip-Hop feels raw as the fillmore
before millions of headphones
checkin for vitals
dead on arrival
america's affinity fo' death
has left microphones wrecked
with icons gone in the same breath

i kill more_ciphers than
tobacco and hash dipped and twisted in wet
spit in debt to the inner depths that echo offa the chest
let go and cross inta a four cyl.ind.er porsch
with more horse wind.. than i be walkin these dogs in (smell that?)

it aint too often i get free
but it was bitting me, fighting me, pesky for me
to rhyme...
and it's definatelly on time as che
in water from the isles of lepracy to get to me
5 decades later to reference me
S.Free
like super nat spitting B.I.G. hefty
except.. i get tremers and see red when it exits on beats
all you coul' do is ask if i want tea?/ if i get any sleep?

but a deadened breed__of music.. leaves dead emcees__who use it
melodies induced in such doses with medusa
was diagnosed in 94 with emotion true enough
to make my flow seem like rigamortis chewed it up
and left the corpses of latch key kids
on each coast of a maps key

when prison bids get you dap
u know uve adapted to livin this rap
and it was a wrap before it did get you clapped

Yo, this shyt was pretty dope, I was feelin they layout and flow. Plus, the wording was pretty cool too, I liked the whole feel and vibe of this peice. Near the end the shyt was really, really ill, good shyt...

Stay Up

[Invisible Vision]

haha, 'sleeps'... great too this entity back around here man.

as always, flow was on point, i could definitely hear it to a beat.

when prison bids get you dap
u know uve adapted to livin this rap
and it was a wrap before it did get you clapped

killed it right there at the end, well spoken truth...

if you get the chance fam, there's a collab "how we get down" is the name, mostly new heads, but they all deserve some feedback on the effort if you don't mind.....

peace to the gods
~IV

[Midnite]

the only other person who more slept on at times than me....but brought the heat consistently....wut up sleeps?

i liked this joint

still bored, still born
hip-Hop feels raw as the fillmore
before millions of headphones
checkin for vitals
dead on arrival
america's affinity fo' death
has left microphones wrecked
with icons gone in the same breath

[sn0man]

Im not into the old school sh1t so there was some sh1t going over my head but the imigery was dope and the wordchoice and rhymescheme was really good aswell