Damn

[Dmac]

shawty wanted 2 ride but ride she couldnt because
her mind was tellin her no while her body said yes
so was her conflict
she wanted...ohhh she wanted it soo bad but couldnt
since she couldnt make her mind conform to her body's wishes
her body belonged to me but her mental belonged 2 anotha
no matta how bad we wanted she couldnt make up her self on eitha
so decided 2 keep her distance
but dat was impossible as we continually bumped in2 each otha
and every tym our eyes met we kne wut we wanted
and distance was a trip since it made her want it more
nuttin wrong wit her man he was a nice guy {how sad his only flaw}
she wanted 2 scream, gentle wasnt her style
but she also wanted da commitment dat came
in da package of makin her cum
came along wit turnin her head in2 a drum
as well as makin her sore from her head 2 her bum
needlessly 2 say she wanted it all
but i didnt kno if i could giv her ma all
i didnt kno how 2 b a boyfriend
she was willin to teach
i didnt think i wanted 2 b a boyfriend
den she began 2 preach
of da lonliness and heartache at da end of da day
dat came wit bein single all ur life
i told her i didnt plan on ben single all ma life
she asked me y i didnt want 2 get sum practice in 4 da future den
"I am a faithful woman and i can teach u to b a man"
somewhere deep down i kne ma heart was all 4 it
but ma mind stronga at da tym couldnt dedicate itself 2 it
so lyk dat we parted our ways
but in ways we couldnt undastand we met again and again
me wit sum difrent trick dat resembled her more and more each tym
but her wit dat same mang
we wanted it...wait no dats sounds childish
we needed it but we couldnt conform 2 each othas wishes
so we parted yet again and again until i discovered it was tym 2 b a man
but unlyk otha tyms, wen i was unready, we didnt meet again
until 1 day i felt a pain in ma chest and i didnt realise wut it was
until a moment lata wen i realised she was tryna move on
so i kicked and pushed 2 da cathedral
in a rush to stop da event dat would ruin ma life
but was too late wen i saw her smilin face bein carriend int a limo
by dat otha mang
damn

[Dmac]

sohh poets lend me ur eyes and ur analytical minds to lay ur thoughts on da lines beneath mine

[persia]

age old question...
f*ck it up when you arent ready vs. wait until you are and miss out...



i'm really feeling your work now... took me a second b/c of how you spell everything (it gave me a headache) but i'm starting to get used to it

[persia]

to raise a man

From the first moment you played in my hair
Kissed me so deep that I no longer missed air
I knew that for you, I would teach
Show you how to love, as long as you stayed in my reach
I heard you when you said you weren’t ready
That your life was complicated, your emotions unsteady
I played the game as best as I could
Even as you rebuffed my attempts to touch your heart, just as you said you would
But I saw the man in you that I knew was capable of the love I needed
And in silent moments, I felt the few times you conceded
Let yourself go just long enough to steel my resolve
Showed me in your own way that around me, you would let your world revolve
One day. So I waited
Held you when you were unsure, with breath that was baited
I celebrated your victories as if they were my own
And got my life in order to make you a real home
Knowing that the day would eventually come to pass
That you would realize that we could have a love that would forever last
Through the pain of your indiscretions
I sat patiently waiting for you to learn life’s lessons
Instructing you in how to show remorse, how to verbalize appreciation
Gave you all the tools to make a woman feel true elation
The boy I met stood before me as a real man
A provider, a lover, a friend, one that knew better than to raise a hand
I thought I knew it all and succeeded in passing it onto you
Until the day you called me just after two
The excitement in your voice erased any thought of sleep
And the way you spoke of the overflow of emotion touched me so deep
You had finally realized all I had been trying to show
And tonight you had finally met the one that made you know
That you were capable of being that man
And this was the one who made you want to ask for her hand
In my stupor I couldn’t comprehend that by the one, you didn’t mean me
That it wasn’t in my presence that you would get on one knee
I taught you how to be the man of someone else’s dreams
And it was for her that your eyes did now gleam
The one lesson I couldn’t teach you, because I never learned it myself
That you can't raise a boy into a man when you haven’t yet become a woman yourself.

[Dmac]

deep....... relates perfectly wit mine...hey maybe our characters should meet hu?......it was real good