Unforgettable (Can't Forget About You Remix)

[DaGhostRidah]

Every now and then
You just have to sit down
****s getting out of hand and you
Need to take off your crown
Life can get you down when you’re already on the ground
But just realize everything is still golden
Believe with all your might that things can still be right
You know it can’t be worse then any other mans plight
Becoming a success
It takes time
Just keep choppin your wood and doin the damn thang
It may seem like it’s to hard and maybe you should just stop, but hey
Say I’m the next big thing at the record shop
Slinky, yeah, I won’t drop till I get to the top

This aint the end, the start of a new story
Slinky, the fame and the glory
What happened before is only one line
Just keep goin hard and it’ll be fine



Now its time for chapter one,
Getting writers block what’s wrong with me
This ain’t fictional it’s an autobiography
My Minds like a map, look through the topography
The high mountains I’ve climbed, low valleys I’ve been in
Up stream without a paddle, I’ve always been fightin
The hot sunny days, the rain and the lightning
I know I’m only fourteen,
But you know that in my life I’ve been through just bout all of it kid
Another setback, maybe I should just screw it
But I can’t give up because before I knew it
It could all be over, pages torn up
Gotta quit hangin my head, I gotta get up


This aint the end, the start of a new story
Slinky, the fame and the glory
What happened before is only one line
Just keep goin hard and it’ll be fine




The hope, the dream, the life, they all intertwine
The ballas, the fellas, the girls they digging my rhymes
My voice, reach out, relate to their hard times
The potential, only can reach it with ya’ll by my side
Verse by verse, line by line,
Forget about life, put you in a Slinky state of mind
Said that I can’t rap, haven’t done no crimes
No first hand experience, but they don’t realize
Underneath this hard shell, there’s a soft inside
A uniqueness other rappers can’t provide
This a hip hop movement, ya’ll along for the ride?
Unforgettable, gonna be here for a long time, cuz

This aint the end, the start of a new story
Slinky, the fame and the glory
What happened before is only one line
Just keep goin hard and it’ll be fine



What do you all think? It's over the Can't Forget About You beat (Nas)

[Advent Verbal Kent]

"No first hand experience, but they don’t realize
Underneath this hard shell, there’s a soft inside
A uniqueness other rappers can’t provide
This a hip hop movement, ya’ll along for the ride?"


This had a nice late 80's pre 90's vibe to it. Much better than the last joint you posted. You still have mad room for improvement. Keep flowin'


AvK

[DaGhostRidah]

"No first hand experience, but they don’t realize
Underneath this hard shell, there’s a soft inside
A uniqueness other rappers can’t provide
This a hip hop movement, ya’ll along for the ride?"
This had a nice late 80's pre 90's vibe to it. Much better than the last joint you posted. You still have mad room for improvement. Keep flowin'
AvK


Once again I appreciate it alot. I'm pretty new to the game, just working hard to get better.

[DaGhostRidah]

bump

[MaCRonI]

this aight ya dig...straight...I'm finna do a jonit with this beat..so...yeah, decent dorp...keep rhymin!!!!

[In$ane $hane]

wrd,i love dat song 2,u ripped it good