Teenage Suicide

[Irish-dipstick]

man last year was crazy it bugg'd me
how many suicides i watch before me
this time is heavy and i feel it wont stop
i felt the biggest regret when nagger dropped
dam man we used to play football we was a team
u now on cloud nine im down here this aint a dream
i no i aint talk to u in ur last days man
but i was kinda in the shade im not a mind reader
i even missed ur funeral cause i didn't hear till the next day
see thats what happens when u move futher away
and dam ady man u jumped suicide peek
we didn't get along but i hope u rest in peace
man i know i said some sh1t when u died that i shouldn't of said
but i aint gonna take it back oh just one i dont wish u was dead
and sarah girl my pops knew ur pops and u jump sucide peek
and i knew u to see so pretty may u rest in peace
and i know theres been more and bet u some that i know
but there all gone now only past memeories keep em alive
cause do or die ill model my self with them in my life.....

[Irish-dipstick]

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[Bronx, NY, USA Lanes]

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I like this. I've been meaning to comment, but I never get around doing so. I also don't remember what I was gonna say initially. Let me try ...

Well I actually have a question now. If u had to describe how each person died, what would you say?

Cause I'm thinking the poem is speaking of how u grew apart from certain people, and all this time, they were invovled in dangerous lifestyles. Almost as if it weren't suicide in the traditional sense.

[Irish-dipstick]

I like this. I've been meaning to comment, but I never get around doing so. I also don't remember what I was gonna say initially. Let me try ...

Well I actually have a question now. If u had to describe how each person died, what would you say?

Cause I'm thinking the poem is speaking of how u grew apart from certain people, and all this time, they were invovled in dangerous lifestyles. Almost as if it weren't suicide in the traditional sense.

i see where u coming from duke....i would usually break it down for ya....but all im going to say is that i was close yet far from the people as u say but at the same time ima leave u hanging in a way with ur question

[Irish-dipstick]

okay upping :smoker: