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#1rapper
12-10-06, 01:01 AM
WHAT I DID......

Was tell this wack kat matt, I would battle him publicly
What it be,he accepted the challenege and set a date fo the end of the week
Told my friends he was weak,that even at his peak could he reach my speech
They aggred, and we slid off after we started shyt off...

WHAT HE DID......

Matt stood there with a glare as i challenged him violently
He kept his eye on me...and said it was fine with me
When i left his breath quickend with speed
He felt thick at the knees and sick with disease
Thoughts of lossin in a crowd full of loud ignorant men
Went in his head...he woud end up twisted or dead...

THAT WEEK I...

I chilled at the crib with some girls and my click
I had two on my dyck, it was all laughters and cheers
I was cracking off beers, and playing madden with peers
The next day i hit the mall was gonna get this outfit that i saw
But the shyt was too small, and after that me and some kats
Decided to ride with five chicks to try to pry throug they privates
No surprise shyt, they turned me down...:dry:
I need to work on my game, then i smirked in my brain
Tmrw i get kill that jerk whos insane...whats his name??

THAT WEEK HE....

Went through his daily routine..acted mean to teens
And was seen on the streets, but at night he would write
Disses and tracks that would ignite vicious attacks
That might split up my back, He fixed his act...
And wen he though he had enough punches in bunches to win the battle
He practced his shyt his act and spits, this bytch stood at a mirror
And made sure his good hood look was clearer
He was confident with his monsterness
He would stomp me to bits..

WE BOTH MET UP AT A LOCAL PARKING LOT...A CROWD FORMED QUICKLY

I WENT FIRST

Yo, yo, yo
This kat matt is wack, infact his raps are trash
How can you rap about gat facts when your name is MATT
(ehhh...an alrightt first line---some of the crowd liked it)
And to add to that..your pushing your luck, you pu$$y you suck
Ill shove my foot in your trunk, just to leave space for your next gay hunk
(the attempted punch was noticed--some kats laughed)
You punk, you chump, you wanna spit some shyt, then spin tha disk
You been da bytch, you wont get a win you prick
(filler right here, best i could do--audience kinda liked the cockiness)
Get off my dyck, and go fix your vocab you slow ***, u the dumbest of jerks
After this go around the corner and visit your mother at work
(pretty solid line right here--crowd seemed to love, they went nuts)

HE WENT SECOND

Yo, alright, yo
You run around town callin yourself the #1rapper, or more like an actor
U disaster, having the biggest hands in the stands don mean u a born clapper
(Good line, damn..maybe hes alright--crowd was also surprised, and pleased)
And look, i admire your desire but your not hard and nice
I scar and slice, your dumbass flunked kindergarden twice
(yoo wtf, i heard that before somewhere!!---crowd laughed and yelled)
And look, ill empty a clip if u tempt me you bytch..you simply shyt
Ill cripple ya kids, have you all popped like pimple and zits
(alright, i'll give him that one--audinece ooed and laughed)
This is it, im leaving your legs all rattled go skidattle
And bytch get better next time u beg for a battle
( i thought the closer was weak--crowd thought otherwise and went nuts)

I LOST

HE WON

You firgure it out...

In$ane $hane
12-10-06, 04:22 PM
itz aiight,aint ya best work lyrically
iz dis jus a post or based on a real battle...?

yaga
12-15-06, 11:13 PM
I'm just going to get a quick reply in here, man... i'll read this & reply later.

Cali_Bud
12-17-06, 12:35 PM
I liked it.. good sh*t

#1rapper
12-18-06, 07:07 PM
good lookin on the feedback