Rhyming HandBook Part I: Matching Syllables

[MaCRonI]

I aight ya'll its the mac......
discussing rhyme form as I've learned and gorwn into it:
First of all:

make sure you bars are have matching syllables:

I spit raw, you flow's blah/
I'm hot like a tanning spaw/

that matches intos meh material..but a good example
Don't do this

I'm explosive like a bomb, a sudden calm like explosions after 9/11 attacks by sadam/
My flows definately the bomb, just to let ya'll know, I'm hard to battle like the Street Fighter com/

Horrible and entirely bland. But period don't sacrafice structure to encompass large concepts..instead chop up the cocept into several bars:

Example:
The Earth used to bumble like bioling water until the brushing comb of time made its surface softer/
Shaped up edgy currents in parted head, and scrapped out all the dead, cleanliness it offered/

Interesting concept but structurally all over the place:

Redit:
The Earth use to bumble like valcano rubble,bioling water/
Until the brushcomb of time offered a surface softer/
as it brought tha shape to parted portions of its head/
scrapped the drandruff and lices considered dead/

Way better all though still a little shabby:


Until next time: Brainstorming Metaphors

From MaCRonI Da Sphinx

[Shenanigans]

i say wazzzzzuppp to the lazy eyed bus driver hes so bummy/
his names albeeeerrrrtt hes crazy id run like michael if i had no money!

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[In$ane $hane]

nah,dis is very good 4 ppl who wanna learn,. keep up da good work MAC

[MaCRonI]

Thanks Insane Shane!!!!!

[roseeta]

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[In$ane $hane]

Dat was Good

[MaCRonI]

thanks shane......
what you need to do know is....et ya bars strcutured and get it done right....ya mean hoola at shane or me for details!!!

[djbriboogie]

hows this, ive been workin on it for weeks. any feedback is appreciated!@

ayo these dudes smell like bologna/
i said these cats is phony/
shot them with the infested chloroform cannons/
scammin mad money off games of backgammon/
im here to rock the show/
kick you in the grill like i was using taebo/
but not that billy blanks/
forget your cars i ride in tanks/
go to the club and bag some skanks/
makin heads walk the lyrical plank/
or physically stab them with a shank/
writin mad rhymes makin myself bank/
got mad hoes dont have to wank/
im about to finish this up cause youll get merked/
ya heard, fukk this, i done went bezerk...dig?

[MaCRonI]

ayo these dudes smell like bologna/
i said these cats is phony/
Umm, this doesn't rhyme..so negative!!!!
shot them with the infested chloroform cannons/
scammin mad money off games of backgammon/
Interesting!!!!
im here to rock the show/
kick you in the grill like i was using taebo/
I'd suggest adding multiple syllabe rhymes to this...I'll explain this techniguq in my next booklet
but not that billy blanks/
forget your cars i ride in tanks/
Aight, ya mean......marginal imagination
go to the club and bag some skanks/
makin heads walk the lyrical plank/
Eh, I'll give ya for using the metaphoe lyrical plank but make sure use meetas to your advantage..this one iseh at most
or physically stab them with a shank/
writin mad rhymes makin myself bank/
No, you forced this and spit somethin' that entirely lacks imagination, rethink ya hymes when you run out of ideas
got mad hoes dont have to wank/
im about to finish this up cause youll get merked/
doesn't rhme...amke sure your scheme always makes sense....



Overall, yopu need to kep wrting and elevating......you'll develop soon enough and spit rawness, just amkes sure to be imaginative and neverfroce thngs to rhyme!!!!!

[djbriboogie]

word word... check this.

I told him, Gimme the cash fast, For I let the gat blast
Jack ya crack packs and run off in a flash
How you gonna be a crook when ya dad is a jake
How you say you from the hood when you live in LA Estates
I told him I wasnt playing so I ran game on his dame
It was "Game Night" So I let my **** "Boggle" her brains
Im the ***** every married ***** hate
I left his ***** with **** on her breath like she used my sperm as colgate
I shred *****s on the mic like wood chippers from saddam Hussein
I took the pound and left his brains all over the wood grain
Im not poor no more cuz I dont bust heat for free
Got so much Ice I could ski
Got more "Arms"(Guns) in my crib than a centipede

i just wrote it the other day while at work. holla!

[MaCRonI]

I hit you back on that..........

[MaCRonI]

I told him, Gimme the cash fast, For I let the gat blast
Jack ya crack packs and run off in a flash
eh, aight...
How you gonna be a crook when ya dad is a jake
How you say you from the hood when you live in LA Estates
mehh...decent
I told him I wasnt playing so I ran game on his dame
It was "Game Night" So I let my **** "Boggle" her brains
last line sows some sparks of lyricism....keep it up
Im the ***** every married ***** hate
I left his ***** with **** on her breath like she used my sperm as colgate
straight....decent metta in last line
I shred *****s on the mic like wood chippers from saddam Hussein
I took the pound and left his brains all over the wood grain
no.....fell off
Im not poor no more cuz I dont bust heat for free
Got so much Ice I could ski
Got more "Arms"(Guns) in my crib than a centipede
ehh...really meh....last line saved ya...decent image

[LAdyxShAde]

umm.. how you educating the masses on sohh when your dumbass cant even spell, type, AND pronounce words correctly.
bologna and phony dont rhyme??
you wack son.

djbriboogie... you need a REAL teacher helping you out?? HoLLa!!!!!!

fall back macroni. you a herb.
im taking over this thread.

IF ANYONE NEEDS A REAL TEACHER... HIT ME UP.

[MaCRonI]

I know you azz ain't tryna take over my school..I'm the principal damn it....if you want to be hired you had best come here with some really good barS!!!!