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MaCRonI
12-08-06, 07:16 PM
Next we zoom in to the cornstarch gingerbread man/
Like a brown pavement slab, what we have here is teamwork at hand/
Concentration Camp oven cook, so brought yellow people a different look/
Blacks appearance became input into your thanksgiving cookbook/
But no animosity, the Chinese and black populace built some trust/
*****z form the brownish crust because survival was a must/
But a plastic knife and mouth shovels brought trouble/
As fingers began pick at their nation, and erosion doubled/
Everyone from themselves, willing to sell others to escape man’s gums/
But one by one, they were picked apart until they were table crumbs/
Enamel dirt samples became ample, too much for them to handle/
The people began to split into peaces, became shook like damsels/
So jumped shipped like Eggs gettin’ scrambled/
Another full-course meal made into an example/

MaCRonI
12-08-06, 07:18 PM
this the jonit i'm do before i drop the big one yo..so show some love!!!

Midnite
12-09-06, 12:47 AM
the asian-black relations boiled down into a meal....

nice concept....flow was bit staggered but i like the concept

too short though, maybe if ya mad eit longer, elaborated a bit more and kept the same rhyme scheme throughout, could make for a good audio with the right beat

MaCRonI
12-09-06, 05:32 PM
thanx mane....you need to peep my other 2 joints

In$ane $hane
12-09-06, 07:41 PM
i like,keep it ^

MaCRonI
12-09-06, 08:36 PM
yeah, ya'll keep showin me love and i'll drop more here...I usually go to nobodysmiling.com to get mines...

Advent Verbal Kent
12-16-06, 01:12 AM
Everyone from themselves, willing to sell others to escape man’s gums/
But one by one, they were picked apart until they were table crumbs/
Enamel dirt samples became ample, too much for them to handle/
The people began to split into peaces, became shook like damsels/



Post up more...Heads are ZzZZzZzZ


AvK

MaCRonI
12-16-06, 10:14 PM
Word up, heads betta wake up...CHYAA!!!!