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Nadira...Rare
12-06-06, 10:45 AM
You should be ashamed of youself
Your cheating heart, mind, body
I don't know how long this has been going on...
How many times you fvcked her... Did you do it raw?
Nope, nah... I don't want to know
I just need you to go
I shoulda known
From the gleam that shown through your eyes at the slightest mention of her name
The smile that crept across your face was one I could never replace
The memory of her love, dedication, and affectio had you frozen in time
And she wasn't even wifey but the one you called #2
Yet she still had this hold on you
Now your hollow words are pleading mercy and forgiveness
Every word I hear is falling deeper into my soul's abyss
Fvck you....
Because I've been patient, understanding, and kind
But I'm still in the shadow of a woman you supposedly never loved...
And I'm tired

Advent Verbal Kent
12-07-06, 12:14 PM
...Did you do it raw?

wow!


AvK

sexydeltagirl
12-07-06, 04:53 PM
Wow, the emotion from this piece is about to blow up my computer! The rawness is inspiring - Enough for me to drop this....

I didn't even cry when I found out...
I guess the tears I had already cried coated my heart like amour...
I just sat still and let it soak in...
You didn't care about me ...
But what was between my legs...
Saying that it felt so good, tasted so good....
My personality causing you to call quite often...
But them AIM became our permanent mode of communication...
I should have known when my calls went unanswered...
That I had been replaced...
But you are a lier!
The words you spoke from your mouth....
Opened my heart up to sadness...
I shouldn't have expected more in the first place...
But it's okay...
I'm dusting myself off...
And fixing my hair...
I'm a good woman dammit!
And I will survive!

Irish-dipstick
12-08-06, 04:32 AM
I don't know how long this has been going on...
How many times you fvcked her... Did you do it raw?
Nope, nah... I don't want to know

lol....dopeline....

flow was on point.....

and i could actually imagine a chicka saying this....

propz.... :smoker: